Sweet!
You have being missed my friend, that much I can tell you, in a world infested with cheap plots and MarySues, your work is an Oasis of creativity and entretainment hehehe

I must admit that you add a much needed depth to a show that sadly ended up being sadly bidimensional in it's problem solving in the end

Now!
On with the review!

Oh! Cliffie ending!
The next one is gonna be so good fer sure! I can sense it coming, I know it will be good lol

As far as thwe story, it was a really good chapter, some awesome characterizations, really good sense of suspence and the descriptions of both fury and desperation were awesome!

Jee seems to be in a lot of trouble, which actually might fit, as he ends up in the crew of the Exiled lol

Hope to hear from you soon enough!
And good luck with your exam!

First of all...

I am kinda dissapointed about the finale, not that it sucked, but it just... well kinda let me down, mostly Aag and his whole 'Not kill the FireLord' thing, I mean, the killed tons of people! It felt kinda silly and pointless, at least to me, I mean, also the whole Avatar state button on his back and so many other things, tho it was awesome to see Zuko Vs Azula both going supersaiyan from the comet, but still it was kinda dissapointing they had to dumb down, throw off Azula, I mean, she wasn't even in her prime... so sad...

And am I the onlyone who saw the whole Aang Vs Ozai fight turn into a Dragonball Z ripoff?

Sorry for the rant XD
And sorry for the late update, but I have being having trouble with my internet,or well had, its fixed now lol

Back on reviewing...

The jokes weren't as bad as you might think... tho they were sort of lame, but those are the kind of jokes we do around here too soo... XDD

So I would give'em a 6 tops

About the drama I got no idea, but hope it will be big lol

As far as cannon characters I would like to keep them to Iroh and Zuko on later chapters, I mean, yeah he spent like 2 or 3 years under their command so that should give plenty to work with hehehehe
Also Zhao would be interesting too, to say the least...

Great nods to Sokka's Master LOL And Hama btw!

Now that I think about it... some mention about Lu Ten's death in your vision would be great

Loved thisd episode btw!
Fun, light, kinda needed after such a long pause, wonderfully worked as always, love the way youmade Jee out of small and big things alike, everything is building up so skillfully

Ad boy, reading Jee describe the situation was almost as funny as it by itself! Was just so crazy, but no doubt a posibility, I mean... I have heard stories, and if half what I heard is true then yeah... you probably get the point xD

ANYWAY KEEP THE GOOD WORK!

XD

Poor stupid kid!

But yeah I can totally imagine what the poor dude was going through, one bad call and everything seems about to go down to hell and the poor child was just so scared, he was just 9 so its not like he was meant to be THAT brave, poor lil'fellow, love this chapter and with the family trying to bribe Jee off xDD

Agni that was just so awesome, I kind of figured it might go that way, but never expected'em to be that forward about it the grandmother was just priceless! Loved the whole thing from begining to end

“You moron. Just walk. And no crying. Agni, I’m never helping someone again !”

Just love this line so much xD
Y have actually said it a couple of times so that is probably it and yes, selfless acts never work out as great as one might expect

Sorry took so long to get around to read this dude
ITs just like such an awesome subject I really don't want to have to interrupt my reading with lesser things, love the idea of the Nazi comparison, cause well,I mean I know the Nazi stuff was kind of crazy in the end, but their propaganda had a point most of the time, and FireNation does have a Nazi feel to it, even if in the end the motives of the whole war turned out to be even less interesting then the crappiest fanfiction in the net...

We all saw it in The FireLord and The Avatar
Azulon was just like: Well I wanna turn evil now... and colonice everybody so yeah I am gonna do that, even if my bestest friend doesn't want me to even think about it

By contrast your character development feels so real, yeah, people in war can do horrible things, but it doesn't mean they are all horrible people, most soldiers do what they must to survive more then anything

After the great development they had with Zuko I sort of hoped for something akin to it, but meh

Sweet chapter!!

Love the whole teashop scene, and the fight! Man that was great, just great, it all went so great, so awesome...
Good thing that pretty jerk got his ** kicked and what he deserved afterwards, his whole life in fear, that's the best punishment ever hehehe

SUCH A GREAT JOB KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMMING

And I agree, its darer and stronger then the show, but at the same time way lighter then the real deal, so far I am loving it all tho

ACK!
Cliffy chapter!
Still it was real good, like the idea of a Fire Nation soldier not totally agreeing with all he has done, but still being proud of not having done worst, excelent character development mi friend, keep the good work, hope I get to know what happens next soon enough

WOW
Its being so long since I reviewed or read this story!
But it is just so damn awesome!!
Great chapter even if indeed the wait was way too long, still that didn't diminished mi enjoyment of it all, such a great development BTW xDD
Can't wait for the next one!!

SUCH AwESOMENESS!
The diference between that is nice and what is good...
Real man's heard earned wisdom, gotta use it sometime later xDD
Maybe in one of my roleplaying settions...

AWESOME STORY!
Keep the chapters going, this is just one of the best things eva XD

Well more reviews help everybody! xD

So I'll try to make this a good one, totally love this story, greatly written, with awesome character depth and development, the whole idea is just so awesome

And great nod to Jeong Jeong btw!
Gotta love that guy, fullblown mastery of his element in such awesomeness, loved that episode, was kinda surprised we haven't heard from him...

Back on reviewing, only complain is the time distance between chapters, tho they are totally worth the wait I must say, otherwise it all rocks XD

o_o
WHAT A GREAT STORY!!
So far its just an awesome idea,I always really liked Jee as a character, still so far I have only read a handful of fics that even mention him, even fewer in which he does anything remotely remarkable too, it was time someone dedicate him some time hehehe
Sorry to hear your computer died on you hope you keep updating tho, this story rocks

I like it :)

Interesting.