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| Readerforlife 2007-08-29 ch 3,  | abusecant wait to see where this goes :] |
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 2007-08-28 ch 3, | abuseDude, that was bloody brilliant! Awesome job indeed, mate! I seriously cannot express how much I love this story! Please keep up the magnificent work! I'm so glad they're both all right! I swear I could feel their desperation and breath leaving them; I think I might have not been breathing as often I shoudl have been! lol. Again, beautiful work! Keep it up!! Sincerely signed, Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;) |
| wasu 2007-08-28 ch 3, | abusehi I love it awesome ,really!! so please update very soon and keep it up bye wasu ps. brilliant work,really! |
| wasu 2007-08-26 ch 2, | abusehi I love it awesome ,really!! so please update very soon and keep it up bye wasu ps. brilliant work,really! |
| StroodleDoodledFuhn 2007-08-24 ch 2, | abuseHello! OMG, poor Hermione! What kind of evil plant is that! It's horribe! Great ending, by the way. Like, seriously, that was freaking awesome! Too late, It's gone, It won't come back. Wow. That was just an amazing contrast. And great plot so far, too. I ahve a feeling that the little girl's lughter and red sparks were just someone-or something- beckoning Harry to save Hermione. Either that or this is all a dream. But I like this a lot, so please don't let be a dream(unless Hermione dies). But I think that Harry will find some way to save her, even if it means sacrificing himself! Haha, kind of. I won't be surprised if he does, or is supposed to. And I'm thinking that Hermione isn't really real. Not like a dream- just not the real Hermione, and it's all a decoy so that Harry will dies so that Voldemort can win. How sad. :'C And where are they, by the way? Is it like Alice in Wonderland or something? It kind of seems like it, but I'm not sure. It would be cool if they were the only ones there, unless Luna is there too, and/or Tonks. Either or both would be pretty awesome. But just them would be too. You have wonderful description. Same with your wording. They're both just fantastic. Good for you! Also, I was just wondering if you wanted me to be your Beta? It's okay if you don't want me to be, just offering. Okay, this is great and I can't wait for an update, so PLEASE continue soon! Thanks! ~StroodleDoodledFuhn P.S. My E-Mail adress is giacocopop[at]yahoo[dot]com Thanks! |
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 2007-08-24 ch 2, | abuseOH! PLEASE keep going! This is so exciting!! LOVE THIS! Keep it up and update A.S.A.P.!! I can feel Harry''s panic and sorrow! Dude, this is AWESOME! *U* Sincerely signed, Shizuku Tsukishima749 ^U^ |