Reviews for To Date A Yautja

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AlphaSigma 2008-07-10 ch 1,	abuseplease please please please! update soon
midnightsprite 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abusePlease, please, please write more! I beg of you!
avpke 2008-05-20 ch 1,	abuseThis story is as good as your other stories. So, it's great.I can't wait for the other chapters!
yukiemaru110 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseOh God! xDD I laughed so hard I woke my mom up. Updatee! >:\| NOW
katz579 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abusewow this is so funny i love it! but i think She is in Real trouble here this "Predy" is gunun get her she needs to watch her back yo!
xYuna 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abusehaha..xD I like it. Please update soon.
Alucard 1024 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseOkay, I've liked all you're stories so far...and this one's no exception! I can just imagine the Predator sitting at his computer! I can also vividly imagine how angry he'd be if he had dial-up!
shifura 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuse'always thought you people were sexy. All those big strong muscles, tall, unique skin that just begs to be explored, and I especially love the dreadlocks.' good lord that is by farest the biggest ego stroke, you go Sasu-chan! plz continue you're wonderfull storys becausei can not get enough of these magical tales you tel me time to time...just keep the work up! BTW love the hari choose@
Outlaw-Lanaya 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseI saw that you haven't updated this story in a long time and that saddens me. I like how this story is going and I wish to know how she will react when her friend finds her. I wish you luck!
Ekiushi 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abuseInteresting concept and a good start. The only thing that sticks out is all the '...' the name of which escapes me at this late hour. I understand it being in the Yahoo Messenger conversation, because thats how people insist on talking. However, perhaps it's used a little too frequently in the other text. Or possibly it just looks that way when I look at the slab of text at a whole. It is also possible that in a first person story it shows uncertainty. However, there's a few sentences that stick out where the ... has appeared without real cause. None that I can see. I also think you've changed tense once or twice. Or maybe my mind is having difficulty comprehending...stuff. Anyway, thus ends my oh so helpful review. Oh, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Sapphire Dragon 2006 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuseI am seriously hoping that you will finish this story it sounds way too interesting for you not to finish it. As for how the Predator should look I have no clue.
SilverFang4190 2007-12-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is a great start! I can't wait until the next chapter. I can tell this is going to get really intense real quick.
NyuuNyuu 2007-11-22 ch 1,	abusethe concept is good ,your story is up in my alert list
dog youkai jane 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseI think he should be black with red stripes going down his arms and legs. Not completely around them, just on the outside. And have two stripes on each cheek. Have him be a new blooded hunter. This is going to be awesome!! ^__^ Up-date soon, please!!
BlkRoseOfMine 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abusePlease Keep going with the story! It's addicting and it's just cruel to leave off like that! LoL. But seriously update the story!

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