this is rather sweet. needs more evolume though.

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I loved it!! Please update as soon as u can!!

i like it, but make sure to put a lot of action in the rest of the story!

Hey i thought the story was great so far. it sounds a lot like patterson. lol

aw!
nice!

O! I love it! grea job!

IT was pretty good for a first timer.

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