I really loved this. My friends and I love Outlaw Star and even made a doujinshi from it. I would definitely like to see more of this. Were you going somewhere in particular with this introspection or is it going to stay a one piece? It is definitely strong enough to stand alone, but I would like to see this thoughtful Gene go through the day or a period of time.

Good work, especially with the grammar. _

hey, i really like this story so far anyway. you have to continue it. i really enjoy the little shadow you put on Gene because these things can always spice up a story! ok, keep writing!

to much poetry / worthy effort

No doubt your choice of a title would piss my boss off as he used to be a dramatic actor, before joining the United Fascist Union, and holds Shekespeare up to a god like figure. But, I liked it, kinda unique.

Oh! More! More! I love your writing style and I love Outlaw Star so I want to see alot more of this.

Better late than never, I guess...I like the depth you gave to Gene. It explains a lot of his moodiness. The series always hinted that there was more to him than the hotshot adventurer he aspired to, and you've opened up that door. Thanks for writing this character study...wonderful as always! *_*

YEAH!..YEAH YEAH YEAH! A marvelous job!..I can't say anything else that you don't know...but damn..that was awesome.

Give us some more Gene baby!

-Kyle

Kool. _ HAMLET HEADACHE! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Alright, sorry, last time I read hamlet I had a migrane for a week. X_X Asome story, but u 4got something. it's something close to. ''perchance to dream, aye, there's the rub to strip thyself of thy mortal coil' blah-d blah-d blah! You see, in the sleep of death, there are no dreams.

Oh wow... Very good... Very in character, I really like the "if there was justice in the universe"... I loved the over all mood. I'm sorry that my comments are sort of vague... I hope you keep writting!

that was deep, boo! _ that story kinda favors me! if you only knew how much i had i private room to myself in college and my suitemates would get off my case! i just want to be like what gene was in the story sometimes ya know. ya know... to think, and stuff like that. if i could have done this, then maybe that would have happen. that story was deep!

That was REALLY good o I liked it a lot. It was funny when you said "If there was justice in the universe, Jim would stop banging on the door and give him five more damn minutes." It suddenly goes from serious to Gene making a joke, and that made me laugh Keep up tha good work .. write a sequel .. pwease? *Puppy dog look*

There's nothing to be nervous about, that was really good. You should definently continue the story. I like how it was done. Good spelling and grammar, which I am grateful for. I don't think Gene Forrest Gumped his way to the Leyline, but he did get pretty lucky. I hope you keep going on this story.

I think The Fanfic was great.

Hiya,

I thought that it was a great fic for what kind of fic it was. I like how u explain Gene with his thoughts on him and his friends. And I deffinatly think that Jim would be banging on his door to wake him up lol. But anywayz great fic and keep up the good work _

Sio-Sami

It was very nice. Keep writing. .; Even though I don't like Gene so much, it was very true and such. "If there was justice in the universe, Jim would stop banging on the door and give him five more damn minutes." LMAO _;