Amazing! I really loved this :D
You are really original and a great writer for sure. Please write more.

This is awesome! You described her so perfectly. I loved each section where you analyzed just what she means to everyone and how she interacts with them and why they love her so much. And the style was beautiful and it came together so well. I loved it! :D

I love it!

Lenalee's my favorite character (aside from Allen) and this fic just made my day

I hate it when some people say that she's a bother to the other characters, which is very untrue. and this fic just proved it all.. I loved about Allen thinking of her as an angel. its very cute. I also liked Bak's part. xD

thanks for sharing this fic :D

i'm glad i decided to read the older fanfics on a whim. many of them are amazing, and yours is lovely. nice language and i love your writing here (:

Whoa. A lot of effort must've been put into this.

You nailed down everybody's character just right, but perhaps the one that I most enjoyed was Linali's herself. It's true, whether rain or shine, she'll always be there, to, as I quote, "laugh with Allen and Lavi, and bring coffee for her brother and the Science Department, and smooth over the problems Kanda creates, and listen to Krory and talk to Miranda and see to Bookman’s needs and – although unknowingly – be Bak’s perfect girl." Yes. I copy and pasted that. She is a vital part of the Order, the only thing that keeps Komui sane, (not counting coffee) the person that provided an exceptionally gloomy place with sunshine and laughter before Allen came along and lit it up even more. Although many people don't realise it, if she were to leave just like that, the entire world of some of the characters would just come crashing down. She is the person holding the entire of Komui's heart, the aerial fighter that defeated a Level 3 all by herself and most importantly, the holder of the clipboard that keeps Allen and Kanda from killing each other. In the same way, the always smiling, always ready to provide a listening ear Linali would collapse without Allen, Kanda, Rabi, without Komui. She is fragile, she is breakable, but she is strong. And with that strength, she'll be able to overcome any obstacle just by knowing that her friends, her comrades are beside her. I am a huge fan of Linali and I do hope Hoshino-sensei will spare her in the final battle and give her a happy ending... Lol. I'm kind of shallow that way. :D

Autumn

PS: That last sentence...Whuh. Impact, mate. Ah like it. It had that "mfph" in it. Ah like that "mfph". Have a nice day!

Probably the most in-character fanfiction I've ever read.

AND IT MADE ME CRY. Damn. I'm such a wimp tonight. D:

aw i love lenalee too! she's da greatest!

Lenalee really deserves the love. Beautiful, brought tears to my eyes. Great job, although I don't really get the title, mind explaining?

Haha, that was cute, and very true. Lenalee helps and influences everyone in many ways, even if it's not always in battle. I liked the little notes in paraenthesis after each drabble.

very well written :)

I have no idea why but I'm crying, and this makes me miss your writing like WHOA.

amazing, i really do think that you got every part of Lenalee (even Baks obsession over her)and its true, shes fragile and amazing but shes still broken inside, im glad that you showed that pasrt of her or she would end up being sue-ish (shudders) keep it up nya!

lonely Kitty

hehe, such a nice pov of certain black order's members... nice...

Very sweet and thought out.

It's perfect