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| PintSizeGenius 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseHey! Truly brilliant! It was so sad, but inspiring too. I loved the ending! Great job! PSG x |
| squintsquad03 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuse*Wipes eyes* That was really good. And depressing. Do you plan on writing any fluff? It would be very helpful in my state of despair. |
| probysgirl 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAw! i just wanted to hug Danny!! it did make me cry! nice job! Katy :-) |
| myeverything02 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseJenn You has successfully reduced me to tears at 9 in the morning. *laughs and wipes at eyes* I am serious. That was a piece of art and contained so much emotion. I felt as though I was there witnessing every scene. From my point of view, you wrote this with such power and depth. I don't think I have ever read anything like it. Brilliant. xox Ash |
| sparkyCSI 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseOkay...So I'm caught in my emotions..I don't know where to cry or laugh! I loved the end, it was perfect, but Lord it was depressing! Only one tiny critic... in the part here: "You think you’re fine and then you stumble across his comb or a song that she used to sing"...I don't now if you meant her comb...or if Joelle had digressed and was actully talking about her hubby. GREAT FIC! |
| artigiano 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseIt was very sad, but I loved it. You really showed how much Danny loved Lindsay in it, and the emotion came across really strongly. Beautiful job. |