Ok, good, like the story and is well written. Now that we know Riku is an A_ _ _, can you try and update? I know that sometimes we go off into Alice In Wonder-neverland and don't come back; and writer's block and life interferes. My niece plays the game and is stuck in one level so I get to hear all of it and well, your characters are nicely rounded, the story well paced, the tension not overly done. Would love to see more.

Hi Alyssa. About time I reviewed. I just finished doing house cleaning and am treating myself. Tomorrow work. This first chapter is great; intense and well paced. Characters are believable and dialogue is good. Am going on to the next chapters.

they need to get back together pronto. and u were there wen i submited my reviews u could've said somfin bout my spelling...geish

So maybe 13 isn't so unlucky...you seem to have your mojo back...I SO wanted to give Riku a hug as he was moaping (i doubt that's how you spell that) but of course hes a jerk so gah! well...continue writing and don't fall of the face of the planet again!

Yay! Is still loving it!

But sorry she didn't review all the chapters.

Update...

Yay! Really really really good (update soon please)!

o. my. gosh.
ogala boogala to the extreme 12 man woah
that waz amazing altho i like the 8th chapter better this is a close 2nd man woah uve so gotta post the 13th one oh man haha deep...VAMPYRE! HAHA


duck

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they so work together eepp
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creezy...

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deep...love it

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‘Maybe she’s a vampire and my blood smells bad. That could be it. But then again, don’t vampires think ALL blood smells good? I don’t think vampires discriminate unless the person HAS no blood. And I’m pretty sure I do, so I guess she isn’t a vampire either,’ Riku thought, once again leaning back in his chair.

otflol out loud jk haha sucker...funny

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they had a moment eepp!

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...wah??...

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duck

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uh..."o joy cuz i jus love bein raped in my dreams"