 Dreamette 2007-08-24 . chapter 1I don't know why I found your story hilarious!! I would never ever ever, would haver made Gabriella a demon, when I read that part, I just blinked and laugh out loud. Amazing idea. Nice story, I think you have to work in your writing, it seems a little rush, but hey is a one-shot. But on the bright side... Great idea! Very original. (I'm still laughing, and I gotta tell a friend to read your story.) Thumbs up. ;) |