I thought that it was moving and the words flowed perfectly together. Not very many authors, including myself, can pull that off.

rockett hardcore,

♠ PIR ♠

This was very intresting and a little sad, but beautiful all the same.

very poetic and sweet. Thanks!

The One and Only
Frek

Yes, this is lovely. No plot other than lovely words dancing as your dancers do.

Thank you for sharing.

pretty good