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| Synnove 2007-10-24 ch 1,  | abuseSo beautiful and well written. The only thing I can say is... SEQUEL! |
| TheHamsterInMyMind 2007-09-18 ch 1, | abuseAmazing job really. You've dealt with it very realistically. |
| Steph7085 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseUrg, I love angst and this was perfect for an angst junkie like me *grin*. Nicely done. I have only one little tiny thing to ask of you though...please please do a sequel. |
| angelaumbrello 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written, I really enjoyed it. |
| spottedhorse 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. I can see it all. Don't you just want to clobber Gil sometimes for being such a dolt? LOL |
| 27dayz 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abusewow i really liked that. It was very well written. |
| Black Tulip 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was really touching and well thought out. There were a few minor grammar problems--actually I think it's more accidentally replacing one word with another, used to happen to me all the time. But the idea's powerful and I remember thinking something along those lines when I watched the episode--couldn't believe Gil shot her down instead of helping her, as friends do. I don't for one minute believe she would have gone back to the bar after what happened, but you made it sound right in this fic--and I bet she would've at least thought of it. Poor thing, it was a bad time for her. For the record, i don't really think Grissom would do all those sweet things you wrote about in the end, merely because it's not in his character to think of them. But it put me somewhat at ease and gave me some closure for that ep. |