 Ainulin 2007-11-12 . chapter 5Roflmao, blood lips. :P
That was a good story too, quite shorter than I thought it'd be though. |
 FloggingFanfics 2007-09-24 . chapter 4Oh no, you did NOT just say Poison was by Groove Coverage! |
 FloggingFanfics 2007-09-23 . chapter 2I see this story going bad, bad places. |
 Aoi Emi 2007-09-17 . chapter 10Awesome chappy! Darkie and Igor! T. |
 Screw You Bastards 2007-09-15 . chapter 10Your story still sucks. |
 the ness-ness 2007-09-14 . chapter 10I think that I'll be calling Raistlin some of those names now.
Dalamar too. DOn't want him to feel left out, do we?
~the ness-ness~ |
 the ness-ness 2007-09-14 . chapter 9This is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
~the ness-ness~ |
 Aoi Emi 2007-09-06 . chapter 9Rastlian? Normal? Psh, puh-lease. That hunk o' man-candy ain't normal in the least. Which is why I find him so smexy. x3 I loved it! |
 SerpentArmour 2007-09-04 . chapter 1Handkerchief. *nods* thief, necessary, possible, kindness, wondrously, and ear tips is two words. And capitalize Proper names and nouns! Kender! Elven! Gnome!
As for the Sue… Plasma Axe it. There is no way Raistlin is going to get cozy with someone who rots in his vision. |
 Screw You Bastards 2007-09-04 . chapter 1Thereasa
Should probably be Theresa.
nonexistant
Should be nonexistent.
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Child, you have way too many mistakes and your character is a definite Marysue. Kill this story with fire, and shake the dust off of your spellcheck. Learn how to use it, and make it your new best friend.
And if that fails, get a damn beta-reader. |
 Omnipotent One B 2007-09-03 . chapter 4Can you use a spell checker? Please. My gawds! Spell check! I have seen so many errors in this story its not even funny. And The Sue! Kill it! Kill it with fire!
Spell check and grammar check are not there to look cute; use them!
Those green and red lines are not Christmas decorations you know. |
 Aoi Emi 2007-09-02 . chapter 8Awesome! I can't really picture the 'what the hell is that?' look on Raistlin but it's kind of intertaining to think of it. |
 Aoi Emi 2007-08-29 . chapter 7Whoo! Please hurry up with the next chappy! I can barely take the suspense! T.T |
 Elvenwarriorlady 2007-08-28 . chapter 6Wow! This is really,really good! It's so hard to find a good DL story these days...*runs to add to favorites* |
 Aoi Emi 2007-08-28 . chapter 6Awesome chapter, please update soon! I'd like to see him blush. ^^ |