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Ainulin
2007-11-12 . chapter 5
Roflmao, blood lips. :P
That was a good story too, quite shorter than I thought it'd be though.
FloggingFanfics
2007-09-24 . chapter 4
Oh no, you did NOT just say Poison was by Groove Coverage!
FloggingFanfics
2007-09-23 . chapter 2
I see this story going bad, bad places.
Aoi Emi
2007-09-17 . chapter 10
Awesome chappy! Darkie and Igor! T.
Screw You Bastards
2007-09-15 . chapter 10
Your story still sucks.
the ness-ness
2007-09-14 . chapter 10
I think that I'll be calling Raistlin some of those names now.

Dalamar too. DOn't want him to feel left out, do we?

~the ness-ness~
the ness-ness
2007-09-14 . chapter 9
This is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

~the ness-ness~
Aoi Emi
2007-09-06 . chapter 9
Rastlian? Normal? Psh, puh-lease. That hunk o' man-candy ain't normal in the least. Which is why I find him so smexy. x3 I loved it!
SerpentArmour
2007-09-04 . chapter 1
Handkerchief. *nods* thief, necessary, possible, kindness, wondrously, and ear tips is two words. And capitalize Proper names and nouns! Kender! Elven! Gnome!

As for the Sue… Plasma Axe it. There is no way Raistlin is going to get cozy with someone who rots in his vision.
Screw You Bastards
2007-09-04 . chapter 1
Thereasa

Should probably be Theresa.

nonexistant

Should be nonexistent.

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Child, you have way too many mistakes and your character is a definite Marysue. Kill this story with fire, and shake the dust off of your spellcheck. Learn how to use it, and make it your new best friend.

And if that fails, get a damn beta-reader.
Omnipotent One B
2007-09-03 . chapter 4
Can you use a spell checker? Please. My gawds! Spell check! I have seen so many errors in this story its not even funny. And The Sue! Kill it! Kill it with fire!

Spell check and grammar check are not there to look cute; use them!
Those green and red lines are not Christmas decorations you know.
Aoi Emi
2007-09-02 . chapter 8
Awesome! I can't really picture the 'what the hell is that?' look on Raistlin but it's kind of intertaining to think of it.
Aoi Emi
2007-08-29 . chapter 7
Whoo! Please hurry up with the next chappy! I can barely take the suspense! T.T
Elvenwarriorlady
2007-08-28 . chapter 6
Wow! This is really,really good! It's so hard to find a good DL story these days...*runs to add to favorites*
Aoi Emi
2007-08-28 . chapter 6
Awesome chapter, please update soon! I'd like to see him blush. ^^
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