hey, i know that story(you've read it to me before) :)

Interesting... Update soon! I'd like to see what fairy tale you're spinning off of!

ok, I am sorry! After reading through the first chapter a couple times, it made more sense, I think I just skimmed over some words, so it confused me, sorry! I like this chapter as well! poor Sarah!
Please update soon!

Good story!
I will have to admit it is a tad bit confusing, but PLEASE do NOT let this discourage you, it is after all, the first chapter, and all my stories are like that too! Please write more soon!

I'm excited for this! It's a charming beginning and I already love these characters.