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Reviews For: Baby lets take a car ride

XxXmrsabbyjerryjonasXxX
2008-08-01
ch 2,
abuseOMG...i know if I didn't want to read this kind of thing, i shouldn't, but if you were sensible enough to know that some people don't like to hear about what you would like your mother to do to you
Random Reviewer
2008-07-29
ch 2, anon.
abusehi again,
thought I might have to admit to myself I'm a pervert, so I read this story too.

It's a good sex scene, or two, but we don't know who the people are, and the chapters are far too short. If you want more people to review, write a proper summery, make longer chapters, add more background to the chrectors, and simply make it longer.

I just figured you can answer my mild flames in the story, if you ever do another chapter, not that I would be worth wasting space on.
ultraradiance
2008-05-31
ch 2,
abuseDID THEY CRASH!?!? DID HE **!?!? C'MON!
heatherheartsthomas
2008-05-27
ch 2,
abuse...
Brian
2008-02-09
ch 1, anon.
abusedamn. this is hot. u better update soon. what's with the girly language though. its already x-rated. ** **. same dif
Tim
2007-12-27
ch 2, anon.
abuseDamn, yo. That's freaking hot. Keep it up!
Ted
2007-10-08
ch 2, anon.
abuseHoly ** man , great stuff !
Keep up the good work XD
Samual Klimmings
2007-08-31
ch 2,
abuseliked it it's hot, please add more
RadialSeneca
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseI bet you were excited that you actually got a review only to find out that its me.
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