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| XxXmrsabbyjerryjonasXxX 2008-08-01 ch 2, | abuseOMG...i know if I didn't want to read this kind of thing, i shouldn't, but if you were sensible enough to know that some people don't like to hear about what you would like your mother to do to you |
| Random Reviewer 2008-07-29 ch 2, anon. | abusehi again, thought I might have to admit to myself I'm a pervert, so I read this story too. It's a good sex scene, or two, but we don't know who the people are, and the chapters are far too short. If you want more people to review, write a proper summery, make longer chapters, add more background to the chrectors, and simply make it longer. I just figured you can answer my mild flames in the story, if you ever do another chapter, not that I would be worth wasting space on. |
| ultraradiance 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseDID THEY CRASH!?!? DID HE **!?!? C'MON! |
| heatherheartsthomas 2008-05-27 ch 2, | abuse... |
| Brian 2008-02-09 ch 1, anon. | abusedamn. this is hot. u better update soon. what's with the girly language though. its already x-rated. ** **. same dif |
| Tim 2007-12-27 ch 2, anon. | abuseDamn, yo. That's freaking hot. Keep it up! |
| Ted 2007-10-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseHoly ** man , great stuff ! Keep up the good work XD |
| Samual Klimmings 2007-08-31 ch 2, | abuseliked it it's hot, please add more |
| RadialSeneca 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseI bet you were excited that you actually got a review only to find out that its me. |