Sweet :) There are a few typos though and also when "what" is said as a question you need a question-mark.

I liked it! Good work!

I absolutly love it! So cute. You're such a great author!

that was really good - i liked the things about Penny's hair. one criticism though - the dialogue seemed a bit stilted in places - but i'm just being pernickety there, so don't worry :D

Aw, I thought that was really cute. I don't know why, but I've pictured Percy as a very shy boy who well book smart knows next to nothing about talking to people. He really did seem happy when with Penny tho.

Still like Charlie best of the Weasleys but Percy is nice for a bookworm.

I love it! That's really sweet. I love fics where there's a clueless Weasley boy! Great job!

Hm...
Nice drabble.
With every book from HP series that I've read I thought about Percy just like about a one from so many Ron's relatives. But in fact, when I finished the last book, I saw him like someone more. That's why I've cliked in this title.
You perfect describe a feelings of young girl, who haven't got any idea, that her "love" really like her too. I like it.

Greetings from Poland, when Percy is only a background of Weasley family,

Jasminum Queen