These stories are great and I was just wondering are you planning to continue them?

very good story, hope you continue it

Why isn't Sirius a free man? He's just been cleared.

hi!
wow i just finished reading a surreal tale and a mistaken fate
and i loved them!
your fics are absolutely fantastic!
and really good plot
and AU
and i liked antares and bellas characters!!
a fractured year seams really promising
but i was just wondering if you're planing on updating any time soon?
well i really hope you are
:D

Liked this fic very much, was looking forward to see where Harry would end up and how he and Draco would end at with Sirius and there moms going at each others or work together.

Read your revised chapters, didn't like them. The chapters were different from your first fics, the writing was different, the chapters were better and cleaner writen. Almost like someone els wrote them

The thing I don't like about them was, not the changes to the first chapters. But the new style of writing Harry and the world he lives in. The world is harder, darker and teh same goes for harry.

Very good story. Just finished reading A Surreal Tale and A Mistaken Fate. A great plot although there are a few things in which i have a problem with but aren't that important and i really can't be bothered to go in to at the moment, but if you wish to know them, feel free to message me and i'll tell you them. A Fractured Year seems promising although I'm not quite sure at which point it's starting? (Still 2nd year or the summer before 3rd) And hopefully if it is the summer before 3rd year there will be flashbacks covering what happened in between. Lol look at me rambling, what i wanted to ask was whether you were going to update this story anytime soon.

Good Chapter
Keep going.
;D

Okay first things first:

I hate you. I have just tried to read another AU fic and didn't even make to the end of the second chapter. It will take me weeks before I will stop comparing every fic I read to yours.

Now things that I like in general:

1. the plot is original
2. it is centered around the characters that I am personally interested in (Bella,Snape)
3. OC (yes I consider Anteres OC)
4. your writing skill is fabulous

Things I like in particular

1. Bella shaping a Slytherin out of Potter (poor Sirius lol)
2. the way you ended second story with Rita's POV

Things that I didn't like in general

1. The story lacks other POVs (I know we can't have everything since then we would probably never even made it to the second year lol, but it feels very imbalanced and I can't help the way I feel, sorry)
2. often you concentrate on trivial things, while ignoring integral characters or important background events (for example Dumbledore)
3. sometimes the story is hard to follow because of above (though I understand that not revealing certain key background elements gives you flexibility and allows you not to commit to what you already have written in case you want to take the story in slightly different direction, but it is still very irritating)

Things that I didn't like in particular

1. slash in the beginning of the first chapter (it was completely unnecessary. I understand that it is your story and you are entitled to imagine Azkaban however you like, but it was uncessary and Sirius fate is angsty enough as it is
2. Snape ignoring the fact that Antares is son of James Potter and Lily Evans. Yes he is Bella's son now, but ignoring at all?

I am sure I can dig up more pros and cons, but I don't feel like it. I am grateful for what I have been given

Saw your IJ, it's rather rare to see a good author trying to actually improve her story instead of clinging to the same ol', same ol' formula.

Saw at DLP that it's your birthday. If so... happy birthday. :P

Interesting Chapter.

Interesting start of year three, I'm curious what this plot entails and especially what is going to happen with the invisibility cloak drama.

Is Harry going to be in a slash pairing? If so...

I thought that you dropped your story - was a nice suprise to see new chapters!

Oh! You are evil!
You stopped when the plot thickens!
Please update soon.
Please?

Oh Antares, how I've missed your surly little face. Seriously though, always glad to see an update on this story!

I love the idea that the mannequins slowly come more and more to life, but I have to say Bella definitely beat me to the punch in saying it seems like there isn't too much killing them and killing people. Well, ok, maybe there's the law and silly little things like that...Really though, I thought it was neat how you worked in that Bella needed to assume that kind of attitude. She's always such a border character, because as much as I love her in this story, you can never quite forget the way she is in canon...

Ooh, and I was excited to see that Antares is hopefully going back to Hogwarts soon? Or maybe hopeful is the better word! I miss Blaise and Tracey, what can I say??

Anyway, enjoying the story, the series, the universe, as always!