 Pennie Lane 2009-02-13 . chapter 3Hehe, very cute!
Buut- I think you should up the rating and get cracking on another chapter! =)
I'm stoked for the next one!!:D |
 wprincessannw 2008-07-23 . chapter 3loving ur story-- ur a great writer! hilarious with great Dasey interactions! I hope you continue...please!! :) |
 alwaysandforever08 2008-06-21 . chapter 3I really love this fic! I wish you would continue it. Great job so far! |
 kristen12386 2008-05-16 . chapter 3i know you havent updated in awhile but i was hoping you would continue the story! |
 Aishitewu 2008-04-25 . chapter 3This is awesome! Please update soon or else I will be sad... :( |
 splenetic 2008-04-12 . chapter 3Hah, this story is just so much FUN. Honestly. |
 Lzsmith8 2008-03-08 . chapter 3Once again, lazy, so I'll just review this chapter.
Edwin! and Lizzie! aww they're cute when they're working together. And they're working together all the time so they're cute al lthe time!
Marti!! Yay! I love her she's adorable and so Venturi-like it's awesome.
There wasn't really a lot of Derek and Casey in this chapter, but there was still enough to make me smile. Watch it Derek, don't get to close to her!
Thanks for updating and please update before the sun goes supernova!
Liz |
 clowneygirl 2008-03-07 . chapter 3This is so cute! Please say you aren't going to just leave it there. I can't wait to see what those little stinkers come up with. |
 Chica De Los Ojos Cafe 2007-12-25 . chapter 3This was funny. Children and their schemes. Derek and Casey sure don't make anything easy on the kids. UPDATE SOON!
~Chica~ |
 Ironysabitch 2007-12-21 . chapter 3ah i love this story! this was one of my fav. episodes too. when derek puts the hula hoop around casey. soo cute!!:)
PLEASE update soon and i will review every chapter!! |
 Zuzzeroo 2007-12-14 . chapter 3yay! sry i didnt review, but fanfiction was being stupid! lol. i luv this chap, it gives u a lot of great info but it doesnt give to much important spoilers away. i hope the next chapter has more 'Daseyish' stuff! i cant wait to see wat u do with this story! 8)
Luv
Tara |
 daisy617 2007-12-12 . chapter 3great chapter. i luv how cute all marti's friends are. especially brooke. i really liked her in that episode. lol I hope they have her in it again. update soon! if possible... i know how crazy school can be. |
 MaybeBaby27 2007-12-12 . chapter 3I'm still VERY VERY interested in this story; Do not cut me off! haha.
On with the review!
Things I liked:
Edwin hiding in the games closet was classic, as was Lizzie whipping him into shape.
Jack's crush on Marti is adorable.
Edwin and Nathan getting into a 'shouting' match. haha.
Family-ship. I love Edwin.
All of the kids ideas were genius. I'm smiling at the thought of them putting them into action.
Derek praying that Sam wouldn't realize he would be with Casey all week.
Derek's 'I like fighting with her' revelation.
Derek's reaction to the hand brush with Casey.
I can't wait to read more! You've really captured Casey and Derek's personalities. With how detailed you get and how well you write everything, I feel like I'm actually watching it happen not just reading about it!
I |
 xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx 2007-12-11 . chapter 3this is really cute |
 SoRightItsWrong 2007-12-11 . chapter 3wow thats really awsome! i like how derek and casey are almost oblivious to the whole thing. but i think that derek should see casey with max. then he will get jelous.. etc. etc. i just love when guys get jelous. i also loved how the entire time he was flexing his hand. so sweet.. write more soon! |