I think, personally, being the freakish melodramatic I am, that you should have talked a bit more in the second section. I would have been thoroughly dazzled had you blabbed a bit more on the shock, and the confusion, and the saddness and focused less on the first section. (Although the locket was a nice add)

Aww, good sense of detail, especially with the locket. I like how you have the dialogue from the game, but add in more depth and detail in your fic.

That was really good! Good balance of sadness. I can almost see Kratos rambling in his own mind standing in front of the grave...maybe ramble more!

I love it! It had just the right amount of sadness for the part. It's really very good.

Aw! So cute. I loved it. So cute! I love Kratos' thoughts on Lloyd. In my opinion they didn't have enough of that in the game.

Sad T_T

it could be more sad-ish but its fine =D i like the part where
kratty is looking at the grave stone =D

it was sad. it was also good! i liked it. good work kitty katz katz!

AWESOMENESS AT IT'S BEST! kinda sad, but still good, too!! aw, a oneshot?!? that's even sadder *pouts*
dd the boy really expect the chosen to just waltz around saving the world?
hahaha, that was funny, too!

Aww... it was sad, but not sad enough, but still a good read! Please continue!

Aw...that's so sad. T.T