 kitcat19us 2009-11-08 . chapter 2great story..so far |
 Spinel Dragoon 2009-03-27 . chapter 3how can i get to this weblog could you email me um word for word instructions ive never really ever heard of one |
 nightwing27 2008-09-06 . chapter 1nice start man harry is crazy being with one of most crazy person |
 Darthme1011 2008-07-02 . chapter 3send me link for blog |
 cdog21 2008-07-02 . chapter 3Whats the link for the blog im not seeing it anywhere. |
 x-slytherincess-x 2008-07-01 . chapter 3Could you please send me the link to your weblog? I'd love to continue reading this! |
 caramel199012 2008-06-30 . chapter 3I agree with Egrim. I have no idea where to find your weblog. Iv looked on the main site and on google and I can't find it anywhere?
Not just you Egrim. |
 Egrim 2008-06-30 . chapter 3That one line didn't tell me much where to find your weblog, but that might just be me. |
 Snapehater 2008-06-29 . chapter 2oh is that it :( dam it was just starting to get interesting
i hope you update soon
nice story |
 x-slytherincess-x 2008-03-18 . chapter 2Wow... I like it.
Update soon, please! =] |
 young wiccan 2008-03-10 . chapter 2I think this pairing is really cute |
 Another Douche on the internet 2007-10-23 . chapter 1I know a lot of people have said before me that this is plagirised off The Spoils Of War. I can see the similarities, but your stroy is somewhat different look and feel to it.
First of all you have Harry as someone smart and not led into claiming Bella, he made a concious decsion to do it.
There is no foolish interaction between the The Golden Trio.
You don't have Harry take out Draco from jail. You keep him in there.
This Harry is much darker than the the Harry from The Spoils Of War. He might be the next Dark Lord you never know.
The Claims Of War is somewhat similar to Aerie's fic, but it's not a blatant rip-off. I hope you keep it that way. I await the next chapter to see what direction you take it in.
Homer |
 rdg2000 2007-09-20 . chapter 2Very interesting chapter. Do you think Bella would be in her right mind so quickly? She seems to be a bit too 'clear minded' right now after a major battle where her lord and master were killed. She also seems to change alliances very quickly calling Harry master now.
Is she just telling Harry what he wants to hear? Does she really have a desire to change? What will this do to Harry's relationship with the Weasleys, Longbottoms, etc.
I look forward to reading your next chapter.
Rick |
 rdg2000 2007-09-20 . chapter 1This is an interesting start... I hope Harry knows what he's doing.
I look forward to further developments with this story.
Rick |
 Meatzman2 2007-09-18 . chapter 2great start for the story, really solid foundation im looking forward to more updates. |