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kitcat19us
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
great story..so far
Spinel Dragoon
2009-03-27 . chapter 3
how can i get to this weblog could you email me um word for word instructions ive never really ever heard of one
nightwing27
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
nice start man harry is crazy being with one of most crazy person
Darthme1011
2008-07-02 . chapter 3
send me link for blog
cdog21
2008-07-02 . chapter 3
Whats the link for the blog im not seeing it anywhere.
x-slytherincess-x
2008-07-01 . chapter 3
Could you please send me the link to your weblog? I'd love to continue reading this!
caramel199012
2008-06-30 . chapter 3
I agree with Egrim. I have no idea where to find your weblog. Iv looked on the main site and on google and I can't find it anywhere?

Not just you Egrim.
Egrim
2008-06-30 . chapter 3
That one line didn't tell me much where to find your weblog, but that might just be me.
Snapehater
2008-06-29 . chapter 2
oh is that it :( dam it was just starting to get interesting

i hope you update soon
nice story
x-slytherincess-x
2008-03-18 . chapter 2
Wow... I like it.

Update soon, please! =]
young wiccan
2008-03-10 . chapter 2
I think this pairing is really cute
Another Douche on the internet
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
I know a lot of people have said before me that this is plagirised off The Spoils Of War. I can see the similarities, but your stroy is somewhat different look and feel to it.

First of all you have Harry as someone smart and not led into claiming Bella, he made a concious decsion to do it.
There is no foolish interaction between the The Golden Trio.
You don't have Harry take out Draco from jail. You keep him in there.
This Harry is much darker than the the Harry from The Spoils Of War. He might be the next Dark Lord you never know.

The Claims Of War is somewhat similar to Aerie's fic, but it's not a blatant rip-off. I hope you keep it that way. I await the next chapter to see what direction you take it in.

Homer
rdg2000
2007-09-20 . chapter 2
Very interesting chapter. Do you think Bella would be in her right mind so quickly? She seems to be a bit too 'clear minded' right now after a major battle where her lord and master were killed. She also seems to change alliances very quickly calling Harry master now.

Is she just telling Harry what he wants to hear? Does she really have a desire to change? What will this do to Harry's relationship with the Weasleys, Longbottoms, etc.

I look forward to reading your next chapter.

Rick
rdg2000
2007-09-20 . chapter 1
This is an interesting start... I hope Harry knows what he's doing.

I look forward to further developments with this story.

Rick
Meatzman2
2007-09-18 . chapter 2
great start for the story, really solid foundation im looking forward to more updates.
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