Interesting twist with the added memory there. Great job! Going to read the sequel now!!

Wow! This was so good! Are you going to write a sequel, where Harry comes back to find Severus? Or are you just going to leave it like this? EXCELLENT JOB! I really liked it.

Oh please come up with the new story soon

Will it be slash betweem them?

It would be more chapter right? Normally I don't like slash, but I like this fic.

OMG that was amazing I can't wait to read the other stories!I could practically feel myself what they were feeling!Awesome job!! :D

That was really sweet ! >_<
I loved it !

very good one!! ^_^ i love it

Brillent! Love it! Great! So good!

:( so sad. well written though.

meep! ned more plz! wow such a good start!

Liked this. It will be a series, right? I'll be waiting for more.

OH my that was good

Beautiful, very beautiful

Wow...I always wanted Snape to survive, he had such a pointless death. He's my favorite character and I'm glad you could write the alternate. Good work!!