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Reviews For: The First Time

Jiko Hitasura
2008-02-14
ch 1,
abuseomg I love you for this...this fic totally made my day =3
Dark Angel's Blue Fire
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuseOH...My...God! I love it! I jut want you to know that you have slowly turned me into a complete Danny/Don freak and now i cant have them any other way. I love Danny/Don to the death and i love your stories they are so great thanx for sharing!
Mina
2007-08-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis was so beautiful. It made me cry. You are a brilliant authoress.
Cat
2007-08-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat story except to call the Irish group 'IRA' is wrong. They might have been conected at one time but the IRA is know for being pretty anti drugs and have been invovled in the political process for a good few years (which means there is no motive for this) and now also all their weapons decomisioned and out of reach. Call them Irish gangsters call them an Irish Splinter/IRA splinter group but they are not IRA.

Sorry love your work and read everything you write but it's a big mistake that can easily be corrected.
junior051
2007-08-24
ch 1,
abuselove, patience and destiny.

WOW, such a complete story, this is how i imagine danny and flack being on the show, well without lindsay getting in the way.

i must say a few tears were shed when danny thought he had lost flack, but then again a few tears were shed when danny and flack got together. (boy am i a girl)

thankyou, this will definately tide my over until the final chapter of sweet love.

And once again, you rule
foxdvd
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseI'll start by saying I'm not a huge fan of slash.

I like my Flack paired with a female, Stella preferably (I think I've outgrown my fantasies of it being me), but a female nonetheless.

Having said that... darn! This has to be the most angstful, romantic, poetically written story I have ever read at CSI NY fandom.

The timing is flawless; the pace, gripping; the imagery takes your breath away in certain parts (too many of them to even attempt quoting them in here). Danny's feelings are raw and brutal and you ache alongside him and Flack's willingness to sacrifice everything for the one he loves... *sigh*
Susan1302
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseIt's a good story. I have to admit that but Danny and Flack? Ew that's just.. wrong? I never saw something more then just friendship between tose two. And I'm not saying that because I'm a DL shipper. (Don't get me wrong. I have absolutely nothing against gay people. If you want to kiss in public or get married, you do that. Be my guest)
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