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2008-08-16
ch 1,
abuseWhat does 'TOW' mean?

Spike
Anonymous.
2008-01-23
ch 10, anon.
abuseI love the whole Titanic comparison thing! It fits so well!
q.thews
2007-11-12
ch 21,
abuseWell, i doubt that Rachel would accept to stay with Ross after that in the first chapter, but all said and done it's not a bad story... a little unlucky!Ross but ok :-)
Ciao!
RnRfan629
2007-09-23
ch 21,
abuseThis was a great story. I really enjoyed reading it and it had the prefect ending. Greta job.
Liason723
2007-09-22
ch 21,
abuseaww this was such a great story, i loved it i hope you decide to write another story.
Imagine what if
2007-09-22
ch 21,
abuseA very nice ending indeed, only made better by what you wrote:

"But then you had to work so, I decided that if I just take dinner to you then you would agree to leave earlier so we would be able to go to the planetarium. ... Rachel looked at him sadly. No wonder he was so mad. "I'm sorry, sweetie." - she finally understood why he acted the way he did.

"But then, I heard your voice from the doorway. You said that you loved me, and you're sorry. You promised never to leave me again, and you promised that when I wake up, you would do anything I want, just as long as I don't leave you. Then I realized that even if my physical pain would stop, I wouldn't stop hurting inside if I lost you again. If it wasn't for you, I would've stopped fighting for my life. I owe you my life. So I want to spend the rest of it, trying to make it up to you." - a wonderful sentiment.

They've had a world of problems which should prepare them for anything that life had to throw at them. Ross shouldn't worry about getting divorced again ... he had finally gotten his lobster.

Please think about writing some more when you get the time ...
RossnRachel4everr
2007-09-22
ch 21,
abusegreat job!! You're story was very well written- you are a great writer!
Donna-Marie
2007-09-22
ch 21, anon.
abuseWell, as you may have gathered from my many reviews, I totally loved this story. You did an excellent job. I honestly think you should have done the wedding, since you could have made it a few months down the road with Ross healthy. You have a very sincere Lobster talent.

While I can't think of any one episode for a story, if you do decide to write anything, I'd be more than happy to read it. Plus I've added you to my favorite Authors list, so if you do publish a story here, you can count on a review.

Take care and thanks for the entertainmnet!
Liason723
2007-09-18
ch 20,
abusealls i can say is aww :D
RossnRachel4everr
2007-09-18
ch 20,
abuseOMG that was a great update! I love the whole setup that Ross did.

Update soon!
dmtennis1
2007-09-18
ch 20,
abuseThat was absolutely beautiful. Nice lyrics, you should put them to music. I have to say you have done an excellent job on this story!
Imagine what if
2007-09-18
ch 19,
abuseI liked it.

This chapter was supposed to be full of suspense about Ross's surgery but, as I read it I almost assumed that he would be OK. I was engrossed by the interaction between Ross and Dr. Green (and a bit of Rachel). It seemed as if Ross, whether the surgery was successful or not was bent on the idea of proposing to her. Him wanting to involve her father was an added bonus.

I enjoyed:

"Hey guys?" she asked. "Do you know why Ross wants to talk privately with my father?"

Monica suddenly yelled. "I DO!" - You nailed Monica's youthful exuberance.
Liason723
2007-09-16
ch 19,
abuseGreat job once again. I think i know whats coming well at least i hope i do :D
RossnRachel4everr
2007-09-16
ch 19,
abuseThat was a great update!!

I'm glad Ross is doing better!
bundespy
2007-09-13
ch 18,
abuseOh no more guesses to have :( :p
I loved this chapter, it's great to see Ross recovering:D

keep it going please ;)
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