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éva
2007-09-08
ch 1, anon.
abusei didnt really like this...the writing was good but i didnt like the fact that brennan's friends got her drunk and used her. it never would have happened...this is definitely OOC.
BonesDBchippie
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseBailadora,
THANX for your entry into this month's "Cullen's Bull-Pen Challenge". Your ff has been read by official (sounds important huh!?) August judge: ~BonesDBchippie. Good Luck!

~G :D
anon
2007-08-24
ch 1, anon.
abusehaha just thought that you should change the "well yeah" to "hell yeah", sounds more Angela :)
SnoopGirl69
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseFreaking hilarious!
goldpiece
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseOkay, the mud wrestling thing kind of cracked me up. The idea of Brennan and Angela caked in mud and Brennan losing her top in the process...very funny. Good luck with the challenge.

Goldpiece
piratesmiley
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseoh that's a hilarious, except it makes me mad at the boys for being such boys. =)
susan3241
2007-08-23
ch 1,
abuseThat was hilarious! I loved it! Really! I was laughing every few seconds, it seemed. Here are my favorite parts:

“Are you thinking what I’m thinking?”

Booth looked over sideways at him. “I never know what you’re thinking.”

Zach finally spoke, his eyes also on the on the puddle. “I think I’m thinking what you’re thinking.” His face was contorted in a sort of frown, like he was concentrating very hard on something.

Hodgins raised his eyebrows. “Oh yeah?”

The creases in Zach’s forehead deepened. “We could go out and identify the different species of pond scum.”

Hodgins smacked the back of Zach’s head.

Tee-hee...I could see the whole thing in my head! And then there was this:

“By the time your top was off the guys were laughing to hard to see anything anyway.”

OMG! Oh, Ange, how could you? Well, that was a good laugh. Great story. Great writing. ;)
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