|Reviews for Shouldn't This Be Simple?|
| Chi Yagami 1/27/09 . chapter 1
I also hope you do more with this :)
| luverofjamesandlily 8/28/08 . chapter 1
i love this couple to and i just started reading about them! relly good and please update soon!
| 000989 9/21/07 . chapter 1
You are an amazing writer. I love KBOW, and you do a good job portraying their personalities. Update soon! :)
| Trixy 9/12/07 . chapter 1
Love it. Katie and Oliver are the cutest couple. :D
| AlyshaNemesis 8/29/07 . chapter 1
I really hope you'll do more... I loved every bit of this first chapter! So please, keep it up!
Oh, and I adore this couple too, but I bet JKR didn't want to have more screaming fangirls than she already has to deal with... *g* 'Those HP/HG shippers are sulky enough', she might have thought, 'I don't need no more OW/whatever shipper going nuts'... *g*
Well, Albus Severus... At least it's no deer calf, right?
Whatever. Why am I even writing this? I wanted to comment on your story! (sorry, got carried away...)
I really liked how they "found back together" through Quidditch... Nice idea.
Yeah, this boy seems to know that he can charm her whenever he wants to... ;)
Okay, I won't keep you from writing any longer *hint*
Hope to see the next chap soon...
| prayitgoesok 8/23/07 . chapter 1
Thus far I am absolutely in love with this story. I really have no complaint whatsoever. Well, I do have one, but it comes from me being stubborn. It's more a wish than a problem. I wish, when Oliver had come to visit Katie, that she had been more cold toward him. But, I was placated by the line in which she says she was charmed by Oliver. I understood in which direction you were going when you said that.
Anyway, the main reason for my review was to say that I would absolutely love for you to continue this story. I can't wait for the next installment. Your writing style is everything that I could hope for in a story like this. The maturity of it is a welcome relief from some of the other stories whose summaries have excited me. often, I find I am disappointed, because the idea for a story is great, but the execution is...well, you know.
But your story did not disappoint. It was most enjoyable. I only ask...no..hmm...I don't know how to word this, as I have never reviewed for anyone but close friends before. I humbly suggest, how about that? Ok, I humbly suggest (and sincerely hope) that Katie does not just immediatley give in to Oliver. I'm sure you hadn't planned for that, but, I do hope that she can avoid his charm for at least a little bit. For some reason, I like the idea that she thinks he has given up on her, and she has decided then that she will give up on him.
Anyway, again, great story so far.
| Mignun 8/23/07 . chapter 1
This is really good so far. I'll be on the look out for an up-date. :)
| Heiress of Lohaust 8/23/07 . chapter 1
What's the matter with Albus Severus?
Nah, I don't blame you, I still don't like Snape. Talk about stalker sorts.
Anyway, I liked this...but I didnt think Katie and Oliver were that far apart in age. Is he really four...or three? years older than her?
If so I just dont pay enough attention.