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| Misaki Love 2008-06-15 ch 4,  | abuseWow, you really captured gaara's...feelings in this one. really nice, awesome! |
| Apollo Owens 2008-02-28 ch 4, | abuseI loved this story so much, still love it! |
| PIIR-Pierrot 2007-10-22 ch 4, | abuseOnly 12 reviews!?! This story deserves far more than that. This story had a fantastically surreal feel to it, and some of Gaara's insights were phenominally written. I don't search for Gaara stories, so I was lucky to find this in someone else's favorites list. Hopefully someone will find it in mine. |
| P'tfami 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant piece. You have a defining narrative style that draws the reader in. Gaara's POV were intriguing to read, and they had the added bonus of not going OOC as is apt to happen :) |
| HaiJu 2007-10-09 ch 4, | abuseWow. That was amazing. The written style is well balanced and clear; I love the way you return to the scent of the desert in that last sentence. Overall, a thoughtful and poignant look at Gaara's character. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story! ~HJ |
| Gaaras-Gothic-Ninja-Sappy-S... 2007-09-30 ch 4, | abuseGaa!! That was beautiful!! You need more reviews! WAY more reviews... |
| HanChan 2007-09-16 ch 4, anon. | abuseThat was amazing. The story was simple yet great on so many levels, everyone was in-character and the words just seemed to flow naturally. A beautiful story. |
| Zetnnik 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully done! I loved the way you described the sorroundings and emotions as Gaara saw them and felt them. This is a truly believable Gaara - not a caricature or an exaggeration. Well done! Thank you for sharing it with us. |
| Riana1 2007-09-14 ch 4, | abuseI love the reproach ypu let Gaara gain; the peace fits him well. |
| mika-chan 2007-09-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseYatta! I love! Please please please update soon! |
| Riana1 2007-09-07 ch 3, | abuseYou have Gaara down to the bone, raw, aching, and numb from the sheer pain. |
| MrsJackSparrow13 2007-09-07 ch 3, | abuseWow. That was really an amazing chapter. You have Gaara's character down just right! I love Gaara/Naruto friendship fics and there aren't many out there that don't have them as a couple, so this is just wonderful! I love the protectiveness they all feel towards eachother and how Gaara is sort of numb to everything at the moment and doesn't exactly know how to put things into words. All in all, an excellent story. |
| Riana1 2007-08-29 ch 2, | abuseBeautiful and heartbreaking. You capture the distance Gaara demands with the sincerity he needs. It is a hard balance that most people can't get but you do and do it well. And the need for Naruto as a focal point was perfect. |
| Madartiste 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseI really, really do hope there's more to this. It's excellently written with a great pace and a lot of depth. You picked a very complex character and did a fantastic job. |
| Riana1 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseYou have Gaara down cold. Superb. |