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Reviews for: The Paranoia Complex
oceans
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
creepy, yet gorgeous.
adore it.
<3 nora
UhmSophie
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
Holy crap, that last stanza gave me the c h i l l s.
It's nice how you explained her thoughts as to understand what she thought about the situation, and then at the end you unveiled that she was crazyy.
:D
Iloveit.

Hm. I wrote a song called The White Room for muh band.
D:
sweet pandamonium
2007-10-14 . chapter 1
gaah its so amazing =DD


lovelovelove.

-favs-

i hope you write more like this, its so amazing and suspenseful and pretty.

-loves it more-
black wallflower
2007-09-29 . chapter 1
M. Delicious.
This was just lovely,
and very poetic~
Ellie0223
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
def. a fave
great job :)
i AM the Random Idiot
2007-08-26 . chapter 1
OMFG STEPHEN KING!

This is instantly win.
Cheerful-Pessimist
2007-08-24 . chapter 1
COOL!! and very cleverly done
-C.Pess
Mousewolf
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
keyblade, keyboard, keyblock to rubble
how can you marry when your husband’s a tart
boys with books who cannot spell
pretty girls that lose their head
boys with books they go to hell
different song for a different wail
how can he marry you without his heart
different boy with a different tail
redheads are loki, seth, and lae
pretty girls in blonde and red
keyblade, keyboard, blonde boys are trouble
redheads are trouble, whatever they say


Standard disclaimer applies; please leave ice in all the wood sheds. And don't let the man hit you on the way out.

I like.
Gray-Rain Skies
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
HOLY JESUS, CONSTANCE!

This...rocked. For seriously. I mean, it was so intense, and really sucked in my attention. I couldn't believe how captivating this was, and, I mean, you just wrote it so well. Like how there seemed to really be something off with Kairi, and how you carried the suspense all the way to the end, and the mystery you shrouded Axel with. It just owned. Amazing job; I loved this.
silver moon droplet
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
OH MY FROG LEGS.

i...i can't explain this...it was amazing...every line, every detail. it had me.

it was beautiful & frigtening.


oh so pretty.



lovely work.
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