OMG!
Whatz happening?
Pleez ud really soon!
I want 2 know whatz going on :)
Amy

Well done. Please continue. *Is dreading Thursday*

i love it, keep going :)

yay! another chapter. good job on it, and hopefully you'll be able to post another soon, because I'm really curious about what's going on with Grissom saying Sara is leaving...

i like alot so far. it's good. i like things that get me interestedin the first couple sentences. plus, i REALLY, REALLY, REALLY don't like Catherine, and she seems semi-evil in this, so this makes it all the better for me!(even if that wasn't your intention)
anyway, keep adding to it!

i love it great job:)

This is an incredible start to a story! It brings up so many questions that I can't wait to be answered. I eagerly await the next chapter :)

an interesting start. I'm glad that, despite having moved and adjusting to a new home, that you are still writing...and it means more updates to look forward to :-)

Though I don't review, I still like your writing. Did I just use "though" and "still" again? lol. Great start. :D

Jenny