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| MC New York 2007-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautifully, gorgeously written, if that is even the proper words. I can't come up with anything either in my vocabulary or the dictionary to exactly pin the correct adjective to this short story. I'm sure others have already commented on this, but the Brass/Grissom friendship is obviously just as you describe it; Its not an intense, "You coming to dinner tonight?" kind of friendship. Its an acknowledgment of each other, once in a while drinking buddy, and a "I'll be there for you when the hard times arrive" kind of friend. I think you hit Brass's character just right, with his dry humor and the intentions behind his words and actions. Getting characters in-character is like being a bartender... You have to know what ingredients you need to make it perfect. =) You, dear author, are an excellent bartender... I'll take a glass of GSR on the rocks for your next story, please. =) Peace out, one love, MC New York |
| Amanda Hawthorn 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseyou always have the power to render me speechless. Every one of your stories is so beautifully written and awe inspiring. I don't know what else to say to you that hasn't already been said, but you are amazing. Thank you |
| Forensic Nurse 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseVery nice look at Brass & Grissom's friendship. They both love Sara (differently of course) & I liked seeing them being there for each other. Thanks for sharing! |
| Kristafied 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseSo nice to see a fic from you, and this is terrific character study of both men. |
| jtbwriter 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThat is so heartbreaking-Brass is the one who understands though, and he will be the one to help Sara and Gris go through all this! Good story! |
| Joan Powers 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseSweet, I love the way you've captured the friendship angle between Grissom and Brass in a realistic fashion. They're not constant drinking buddies, but still, they're there for each other. Joan |