 Artika 2008-08-02 . chapter 9Very very good. The ending made me teary. I love the idea that what goes on inside is so much more important than outside events. |
 Lua under water 2008-06-03 . chapter 9Oh my goodness. I can't believe I never read this fic! It's just... incredible! I'm literally speechless. You've just managed to capture the essence of everything, and everyone, and the language flows so nicely, it's just a wonderful story! Thank you for writing this.
P.S. Have just finished a new chapter of A Truth to Lose, finally, and just wanted to let you know that it will be up soon :) |
 MatoakaWilde 2008-01-18 . chapter 9I seriously f**king loved this story so much I probably like it as much as you do, maybe even more. Def. going on my faves. I loved the quote and the end, everything about it.
"a simple regret that the love she had once felt was no longer there." Couldn't have said it better myself! Oh and I read your A/N about hits and reviews. I can related, My Sev/Lily story "THE WOUND THAT WOULD NOT HEAL" has like almost 1500 hits and 8 reviews. WTF? But I always write for myself before I write for reviews. ANyway LOVE LOVED LOVED this story can't say it enough! |
 MatoakaWilde 2008-01-18 . chapter 8I loved this chapter, as I have loved the others! I really like when James comes over and freaks out about postmen. lol |
 MatoakaWilde 2008-01-18 . chapter 7Oh I love Remus. The poor bloke. |
 MatoakaWilde 2008-01-18 . chapter 6“I see, so it must be a forbidden love, a shy little Hufflepuff perhaps? Or a bookworm Ravenclaw? Or heaven forbid! A naughty little Gryffindor?”
Oh so wonderful and accurate! |
 MatoakaWilde 2008-01-18 . chapter 5"Severus did not belong to her future" I am reading this sotry in one sitting, something I don't usually do. |
 MatoakaWilde 2008-01-18 . chapter 3ach i love this so much, this is the kind of story im always looking for and never seem to find! LOVE LOVE LOVE THE LINE "Lily wore both James’ jumper and Severus’ needle." favorite |
 MatoakaWilde 2008-01-18 . chapter 2I will review every chapter i love it so, "She was actually quite smitten by these gestures" and the part about adding his blood is great, just great1! |
 MatoakaWilde 2008-01-18 . chapter 1I really like this! I like how you write Sev and Lily! |
 xRosePetalx 2007-11-05 . chapter 9Wow. A really great way to end this amazing fic. I like how Lily finally got over him and how she buried her past as Sev declared his never-ending love for her. This was a really great fic, and I really enjoyed it! |
 xRosePetalx 2007-11-05 . chapter 8Aw...that was so sweet. I love how James got along with Lily's parents and how Mr. Evans gave him a reindeer. Pure genius! |
 xRosePetalx 2007-11-05 . chapter 7I like this chapter. Remus always has the answers, and I love your name for their full-moon escapades. :) I like how Remus soothed her and basically told her what she already knew; I know from experience that it really helps. Nice chapter! |
 xRosePetalx 2007-11-05 . chapter 6I like this chapter, particularly the reference to how Sev would become the Dark Lord's most trusted servant. This shows why, which is, I think, crucial for us to understand in how he could have risen in the ranks when he didn't really believe in what he was selling. Good job! |
 xRosePetalx 2007-11-05 . chapter 5That was good. I like the figurative language that you used, especially "a noxious weed among a field of daffordils". (I have a thing for figurative language :]) Lily lived for distractions in this chapter, and I can't wait to see how she deals with it later. |