wow! hope you can guess from the name who i am! ^^`

i am...sort of a fan for this pairing but i favor narusaku more...! ^^`

but this one is GOOD!! really good! i think i stumbled across it before but i think i forgot to review! anyhow...it was touching and veary realistic and man it would be awesom if it when down like that in the anime! ^^-

keep up the good work! ^^-

I think you are right on the money with the character actions. Only..knowing hinata. She prolly would have fainted å few more times. But all in all this is the best story I have read so far that play to their character. And I have read A LOT of naruhina.

5 out of 5

nice
chapter two would be good

this is really good. please make a second chapter! this story is goin in my faves.

I LOVE this story!

Dude this is one of the best, if not the BEST, NaruHina I have read. It was all so realistic and not OOC. It seems like this is the way it should really happen. Great piece of work!

You're right--Naruto's reaction in many of the other NaruHina fics that I've read, while pleasantly fluffy, sometimes fails to take into account that Naruto is, unfortunately, a little bit dense. I really did enjoy this piece, as it was quite well-written and, yes, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. I'd really love to see a second chapter.

i dont know what OOC means but i still liked it it wasnt completely cheestastic and stupid like all the other naruhina fics

Yea thats what im talking about!

You have an excellent story and writing style. I could fully see you turning this into a continuing story line.

A good plot with interesting ideas...

Excellent incorporation of characters into the story...

Beautiful and emotional dialogue...

All in all, it would have been excellent if it had more substance to it. It seemed to skip important moments and speed by quickly.

In my opinion, this can be solved by going into more details with certain aspects of the story and perhaps including what
people are actually doing/thinking/feeling during jumps (8), instead of mentioning what occured in passing.

Still, a true tear-jerker and excellent example of Naruhina fanfiction.

I loved the story! I hope you write more naruhina stories.

A nice story, I'm a fan of the pairing and you did it well!

...Idiot...T.T...

You should really do another chapter. It was good, and really realistic, like you said ^.- Naruhina RULZ!