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fancyspinner
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
It's so good to find someone else that sees Gai as something other than commic relief. This is awesome. Thank you so much.

Hmm, very interesting theory as to when Naruto is set.

I wish there was more info on Gai but there isn't (sigh) Any how, thanks again for this great little fic.
Uchina
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Funny fact, I feel enlightened and extremely touched. No idea why.
NikkiRubio101
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
=) i like this it made me smile the entire tiime! my fav was #15
Meatzman2
2009-09-06 . chapter 1
I've read all three now. I'm going to try to describe the feelings I'm experiencing now to you. I've got this pressure in my chest just above my sternum that is somehow both simultaneously incredibly powerful as well as soothing. I'm feeling so much respect for your characters right now, I might just burst.

Fanfiction at its best.
Lady Knight Keladry
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
This is really good. It's really insightful and I find it adds a whole other dimension to Gai.
FelicitasFoo
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
I love how in-depth your writing is. Brilliant! Even if Gai is not quite a mainstream popular character, this introspection on his past and thoughts is nothing short of fantastic. I enjoyed this fic very much.
Willow-Bee the Cat
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
Loved it! Especially how Gai became a shinobi.
iPAiNTED
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
wonderful.
luzopi
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
Great character building!! Especially since Gai is somewhat overlooked most of the time. A good take on the man behind the green spandex. :D
Aikora
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
lol, okay this is way more of a comedy, great work!
senkoed
2008-11-11 . chapter 1
i really liked this line "As a side note, Gai and Naruto both tie for the records of the most headaches induced in the examiners, ever: Gai because of his unyielding fists and stubborn worldview and Naruto because of his unyielding worldview and stubborn fists.". the alternation is really fun. xD

thanks for the really interesting view on maito gai!
DarkAuroran
2008-10-28 . chapter 1
My god. You've done it again. First with Neji and now with Gai. I cracked up laughing at number 18! And I love how you depicted Gai's father. Also, the section where Naruto trusts Gai because his 'gut' feeling is just fantastic. Good to know Kyubi still recognises his own after so long.
I'd love to see you write one on Lee one day. I'm sure that would be impressive.
Lady of the Hunt
2008-10-25 . chapter 1
Every time I reread this trilogy, it gets better and better. ^_^ I especially like this one. ^_^ Thanks for writing about Gai!
susie
2008-10-24 . chapter 1
Ahh, this is funny! I've always thought that Gai was the most ridiculous Naruto character ever, and you made that ridiculous sort of endearing. Love the symbolism. Yup.

Just a few things:

"More than that, he likes himself, and not one person who has ever looked down on him in his life can say the same." Did you mean to say "can say otherwise"?

#5 is a bit redundant - you say "told him/them" a lot. But on the other hand, are you trying to create an effect like "they tell him, they tell him, they tell him,..." and he's just like, "Woah, hold up. I'm telling YOU, and that's final,"?

So yeah, I love your writing. I like "the Jinchuuriki has style" part. That's funny. Do you like the Hyuugas? Do you think you could maybe write something Hyuuga-centric? (Love the Hyuuga Clan.)
Leo Delkin
2008-10-20 . chapter 1
** brillint
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