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Giuli Miadi Black 2008-06-30 ch 11,	abuseOh, my dear Lord, I loved it. Totally. Please let me know if you write anything else about your BadAss!Nick, because I simply loved him. I actually believe he's more like this than the nice-guy version of him. And the lemon was awesome. Specially because of Sofia's little 'toy'. XD Good luck with your muse, dear!
Tabula-rasa33 2007-12-07 ch 10,	abuse“I can almost hear Doc pronouncing you…” Nick made his best imitation of the coroner; “She died of a laugh-induced orgasm combined with a concussion sustained mid-coitus, which she got after tumbling backwards after a particularly ill-timed ram-like thrust…” i laughed for like 20 mins OUT LOUD before i could regain any sense of what i was doing before... wow you.totally.rock
marialisa 2007-10-09 ch 11,	abuseWell you hit that one out of the ball park didn't you? I think that has to be one of my favourite chapters from any fic I've ever read. The sex was amazing, the humour was hilarious and the ending was perfect. Clever girl :)
Haldir's Heart and Soul 2007-10-08 ch 11,	abuseWhat an ending!KUDOS!
notesofwimsey 2007-10-08 ch 11,	abuseWell, I love my smut-fests, as you know, but I really prefer silly, fluffy, hot, passionate, screamingly funny scenes in which the characters shine through, and you managed that as always! Just the THOUGHT of Nick with a bright pink vibrator makes me giggle, but not as much as Sofia stubbornly naming the thing Pika even though it showed up the wrong colour!
SaraLou 2007-10-08 ch 11,	abuseROFL at Nick trying it out. Could totally picture it... Well done :)
Alexandra Khayman 2007-10-08 ch 11,	abuseI'm SO sorry for the lack of reviews lately... With school, I've been barely having time to have a life and doing such simple things like reading and/or writing have been hard to conquer. Apologies done, let's get to the point: the story. It's over! =( I admire the way you managed to mix humour with smut and with silly fluffy romance (who doesn't like a bit of silly romance once in a while?). It made the story not look so 'heavy' in the end as it was in the beginning. It was really nice and well done. Other interesting points... well we have the usual suspects: meanie cliffhangers, BadAss! Nick (keep him around would ya?) among others. All of them were perfectly chosen to create this Quagmire. And it was difficult to escape from this story. Good work! =)
RenLissa 2007-10-07 ch 11,	abuseAfter all that build up - and angst - a little silly romance doesn't hurt. Feel free to bring out Bad Nicky when ever you feel the need to play.
Samsara Dallire 2007-10-07 ch 11,	abuseThe song that played in my head for this chapter was "Fever"! Never know how much I love you..
SallyJetson 2007-10-07 ch 11,	abuseWell I for one loved the mix of raunchy humor and tender sweet emotion. I particularly like this exhange “You needn’t be jealous of Pika, you know,” “He doesn’t fill me up like this.” “He doesn’t keep me warm like this.” “He doesn’t hold me in his arms like this.” “He doesn’t kiss me like this” “He’s never told me he loves me” Nick smiled at this. “And I’ve never told him, either.” Sofia was silent for a moment, and then reached with her hand to cup his face. “I love you, Nick Stokes…” A wonderful way to integrate the raunchy with the tender.
SaraLou 2007-10-01 ch 10,	abuseLove that the sex didn't go completely to plan, much more fun this way...and Nick found a 'friend' to play with LOL!
jaed621 2007-10-01 ch 10,	abuseOkay, where to begin?! There I was all comfortable on my couch, excited that this chapter had come up and lured by your promise of consumation I was in the frame of mind for a little romance and a lot of hard core (but very loving) sex as only you can write it. I should have known, been suspicious or something but no I plunged into this chapter with my sexual expectations held high and ended up laughing my ass off. You do sex and laughter like no one else out there and in a way it was perfect that you took all the pressure off the scene with that fall. I love that they're walking around naked with their motors running and that she had a laughing orgasm was outstanding! Every detail was perfect, the no fun food in the house and the vibrator left on the bed...only you can create such a great scene with all the details in place. EXCELLENT job. Even with my smut expectations so high as I started the chapter, I still ended it with so much more! A good laugh is priceless. Please, keep writing!
Mma63 2007-10-01 ch 10,	abuseMore than pleased...sex and fun...couldn't have been more perfect...actually, Nick's first thoughts on making it very slowly maybe...More, please, hurry!
marialisa 2007-10-01 ch 10,	abuseYOU-ARE-A-TEASE! Love the set up - Nick walking around the apartment babbling to buy himself time to work up the courage to say what he came to say. And Sofia being turned on by him taking an interest in all the things in her apartment...excellent! But the sex...roflmao. Wonderful. Humour and hotness rolled (literally) into one! Post chapter 11 quickly...you're not the only one who can threaten violence and I want to see what happens...!
notesofwimsey 2007-09-30 ch 10,	abuseROFL&F I think we need a new acronym (see if you can figure out the ending here - ff won't show it anyway!) Loved that they ended up in a laughing fit (well, as well as everything else). Any more pain, angst, or anger would have been too much, and this was a great way to move them to the next leve (the bed instead of the floor?) LOVE the cliffhanger - I can just see Nick's face!

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