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| creative-writing-girl13 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really good! It was also really sad. |
| Destiny J. Adams 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was very good! I love the song Cassie by Flyleaf. My brother has the CD. I also noticed that you also had good punctuation. Very good! Sincerely, Destiny J. Adams |
| Cookies and Cream Fan 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abusethis is so good! |
| Broadwaypoetess 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseIt's a nice poem, but qould be better on a different category or site, just fyi. It looks odd mixed in with all the slash and angst fics. |
| Adi Sagestar 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story, but it belongs on fictionpress dot net, FFN's sister site for original works. I am trying to unclutter this category, so if you could move it it would be much appreciated. Regards, Adi =^.".^= |
| Risu Yamanaka 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseUm...interesting. |
| lalakid87 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseIt's was uhm beautiful, you could say. Very good. |
| anonymous 2008-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseby the way, i live in WV also. it makes me happy to find someone who reads tamora pierce also. my neighbor loves her books also. |
| anonymous 2008-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautiful. i think that martyrs exist in modern times and the Columbine incident proves that. your poem is just one more way to praise the lord, even though columbine is a touchy issue. i feel that the poem did them justice. i read your dislikes and i agree. anyone who slanders god is a poophead. |
| Christian Bookworm 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThank you so much for putting christian things on this site. I love it! |
| Princess-Kari-chan 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseaww that was vary tuching and don't lisine to those jercks i love this poem^^ and can you messgae me plz? |
| The-Reporter 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThis poem does not belong in this category. Reported. |
| Katy 2007-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery touching! |
| Crystal Katanmiri 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseWow... how deep. It really makes me think about standing up for may faith. Bravo for making this into a poem. Happy writing, Crys |
| The Phoenix strikes again 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abusei like your poem and everything but...of course I have a but...she new he had a gun when he ask her. The poem makes it seem...I don't know...different. Like she did not what was going on. She choose God, not her life. You poem doesn't really hit me that way. |