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Reviews For: Designing a Friend

IrethFalassion
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseFantastic fic! I love how you wrote Cornelius' dilemma about trying to design a family member, when really someone that unique really has to 'grow' into themselves. This is really brilliant! Fav-ing!
Cheers!
Elvenstar Imrahil
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. Most of the stories I've read that can be classified under 'Heart', are not very well written. Yours, however, is a refreshing exception.
phoenixflame
2007-09-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseYeah, it does make me go "AW". Oh, man. This is good. Really very good. Cornelius needs to go kiss Franny and thank her profusely and see as she's bewildered until he tells her why. -sigh- Absolutely lovely. And no, you can't really program a swagger.
doodlegirll
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseVery cool! Loved it! So that's how Carl came around!

~Robin
KittenDC
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseAw. This was so... sweet! There really is no other word for this. I'm so glad someone has FINALLY broken the trend of Future!Daughter/NewFamilyMember/Wilbur&MarySue parings to write fun stuff like this :D

You made my day. :3
Jill
2007-08-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou know, I haven't found many fics in the MtR fandom that capture my interest. Usually anything set in this era makes me go "eh" and scroll past, and I need to stop doing that because I could be missing little gems like this. (Though really, anything you post from now on makes me stop and go "MUST READ" cus you're just great like that, for serious.) And you know, I like that Franny gets to be a part of the process; Carl may be a friend, but he's also kind of like their first child this way. :)
Secretwindow1
2007-08-24
ch 1,
abuse-and turned to serve breakfast to Fritz’s little Lazlo and Tallulah, who were currently strangling one another with a determination not usually found in three- and six-year-olds.

LOL!!

That was a sweet fic! Very well written, great job! :D
NobleBrokenBeauty
2007-08-24
ch 1,
abuseThat is so cute! You're going to continue with this, right? I really hope you do! Update, please!

NBB
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