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| Oscarisamazing 2008-09-14 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice, and I don't say that often. I like the characters and their development...three-dimensional, though a lot of the secondary characters are somewhat flat, Oliver and Beth especially; both seem like stereotypes. Still, best MB fic I've read yet. Good going. |
| KK92 2008-08-21 ch 2, | abuseMaybe it's just because my band is really accepting, but we wouldn't care if a football player join our marching band. In fact, we've got a couple football players and a lot of other sports in concert band that doesn't play in marching band. |
| Mage-Yewoqirife 2008-08-18 ch 16, | abuse*Sque!!* Want. More. Now!! lol I'm in love with this story.. and Oliver is adorable. ^,~ But yeah.. hurry up and update! Please and Thank you!! --Dani |
| azncaramellepride 2008-08-16 ch 16, | abuseAwesome! This has to be one of my favorite stories ever! Update soon, please! |
| Kojin 2008-08-16 ch 16, | abuseMarc and Lily went to the throne to get the Homecoming Title; Marc got crowned and made Beth proud; but Lily was set on fire. hahaha! Brilliant! I think this chapter was very funny. I really loved Casanova-san. That was funny and seemed like a really Roger thing to say. I can't wait for part B! |
| Lily-Snape-568 2008-07-18 ch 15, | abuseOnce again, tres magnifique! J'adore! |
| Nikki 2008-07-13 ch 15, anon. | abuseAHH I can't remember my password for this thing... so, anonymous review! Love the story, keep it up. When is the next chapter going to be up? I hate reading un-finished stories, because then I have to wait for so long! Well, I will keep an eye out, try to hurry! :) |
| shamus-celtic-heart 2008-07-13 ch 15, | abuseoh lily, poor chica |
| Kojin 2008-07-13 ch 15, | abuseI really liked this chapter. I'm glad that Marc caught Lily, although it would have been funny if he hadn't. I really like this part: “We’ve got to do something,” I say, after all, Roger could make murder look like an accident. “I say we put arsenic in all the male’s mouth pieces, and stick M-80s in the drums.” |
| shamus-celtic-heart 2008-07-12 ch 9, | abuseyou are a goddess at the writing. i have never found a more appropriate band story. you write so well, i feel like i am reliving freshman year. |
| shamus-celtic-heart 2008-07-12 ch 4, | abusei LOVE this story |
| EdwardAddict 2008-07-10 ch 15, | abuse=] I'm glad I got you to 100. Who's hitting Lily? o.o I'm in love with this story. =] EA |
| BassClarinetSweetie 2008-07-06 ch 14, | abuseI really like this. I like how Marc is falling for Lilly. It's sweet. I hope you update soon! |
| EdwardAddict 2008-06-29 ch 14, | abuseLMAO. Flag girls. This is so amazing. I hope you update soon! EA |
| EdwardAddict 2008-06-29 ch 11, | abuseO.O Omg, poor Roger! But man, if the other band wants to talk tough drills... Last year we did a drill were we triangled around each other. My triangular partner and I narrowly avoided killing each other. EA |