I love the last paragraph. It's full of win, like

"she liked to count, just so she could lose track"

and "the future didn’t scare her nearly as much as the amount of cologne Squall took to wearing each day"

I like this one. Not too deep for me.

Well, interesting little tidbit here. Kinda short, but still nice. One thing: Larger chunks are good. seeing a story comprised of completely single lines makes me cry. Your style is quite good. I hope to see more stuff from you
Simba

Oh, wow, that is wonderful.
I've always been so jealous of what a great writer you are (you and several others). Then I took comfort in being able to write really motavating speeches. Then Alex would act like some Squall/Cloud/Sephiroth/Cid hybrid. I'd be mildly upset, and go write really terrible poetry.

Well, some of my poetry kicks ass now. And I've realized that the only way to be a better writer is get off MY ass, get some life expiriance, and flip on my computer.

Now I spend a great deal of time editing, deleting, and improving.

Thanks for motovating me to get better at writing.

My English teacher thanks you.

Oh gosh haha.

This is like really über-cute.

"but mostly in the interest of being alone."

No subtext there. No sir. :)

hmm the last paragraph its a bit tl;dr
but i actually DID read it and luv it ;)

“There will always,” he said, “be a future.”
“And what a future it is,” Yuffie muttered.

i like that... v. cute ;)

AH. This is so awesome. You have the characterization down perfectly, even with characters like Cid who didn't even talk in this, but GOD. And aww I like caring!Squall who talks to Yuffie a little and then takes her out to take her aggressions out on the Heartless. And the line about Heartless candy cracked me up.

I don't care how long Yuffie's rambling blocks go on! XD I love them no matter what the length. I laughed so much at the rock/mountain comparison comment towards Leon. Ya know, he DOES remind me of a rock. It was nice to have the Traverse Town-type setting and characters, so that's a plus. :) Brilliant writing, girl. Oh, and I want to chase moogles now. :P

oh man this owned.
(i don't like yuffie but still.)
WHOA. DID YOU KNOW HAS AN EDITING THING IN THE REVIEWS THING?
BECAUSE MY YUFFIE IS UNDERLINED WITH RED SQUIGGLIES!
AND THE WORD SQUIGGLIES TOO!

~spaz~

!spaz too!
this is amazing. must go leave zillions of reviews with words spelled wrong.

You already know how I feel about this, but, I find it necessary to squee over it some more here on FF.

So. *SQUEES*

It's so Yuffie and angsty and lighthearted all at once. I'M SO PROUD OF YOU. *gushflail*

Plus, you know, one can never go wrong with some good old SqualleonYuffie (and that makes it look like a threesome. Whut.)

Ilu.

Yeess, like I said, I love this. :D

You're pro at writing as Yuffie. I mean really. Everything she does/says/thinks is perfecto. And Squall~

..I found more quotes I like. xD

'leaping from bench to bench and taking daredevil jumps from the balcony’s edge (but that was just Yuffie, Squall took the stairs,)'

Heehee. It's just. Every comparison. So good~ D:

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lol I love Yuffie's rambles! Gosh this little fic was so awesome! I love how everything just flows in a certain way. Like, people talk, but it isn't always the traditional "words here", "name here" said. And like how you said Leon was like a rock but then he became a mountain hovering over Yuffie. Thanks for a great read! :faves: