Okay, this one made me laugh my ** off. The imps were great and the lighter dynamic between Sephiroth and Cloud made the whole thing seem more adventurous, less emotionally heavy. Really, you're one of the few that has made my Favorite Author archive, considering you can write the whole spectrum fantastically. Keep it up. -Wolf

OKay, so let me start by just thanking you for ALL of the Kingdom Hearts Seph+Cloud+Zack stuff and the FFVII stuff too!

You're seriously like my favourite author on FF right now...

:D

I love the way you see Sephiroths personality, it fits the one I have in my head straight on! And of course I love Zack too...( he's my fave, after all ) and the whole FRIENDS PROTECT EACHOTHER stuff is so GGRREAT!

Makes me feel all warm inside! Ahh!

But yes, this was ANOTHER successful installation to your KH...thingy/story and I can't wait for more!

I really don't have anything to critisize...

Just keep it up!!

I love this story!^^

And the Cloud & Seph banter is just so great! I laughed so many times. XD

And I love how Cloud's denying caring about Seph...even in his own thoughts, chalking it all up to Zack.

Oh boy...so many of the comments in here were just priceless.^^ And you used "Let's mosey"!

If I could add this story to favorites, I totally would.^^

-Kazaam

Ooh, I'm really glad you didn't give this one up! I loved all of Cloud's sarcasm, especially the bit about what the creatures eat when they aren't eating Cloud, lol. And the "let's mosey"! XD Man. That's such a wonderful bit in the game.

I really liked the create versus destroy stuff in this one, and the return of existentialist Sephiroth. LOL.

Anyway, awesome oneshot. It just had a nice feel to it, you know? XD It was really fun, in a way.

I truly love this whole series you've got going.