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Reviews For: Victim, Culprit and Detective

Miyano Ran
2008-05-18
ch 3,
abuseNicely written fic! But...I still don't understand why Ran would do that! So...I guess Heiji likes Ran now? Ran should and must rot in jail if that is so! She's very bad and evil in this fic...oh yeah, by the way, I like the appearance of Miyano! Awesome!
Miyano Ran
2008-05-18
ch 2,
abuseOh my gosh...so Ran killed Shinichi because she loves Heiji instead? And Heiji caught her? Interesting!
Miyano Ran
2008-05-18
ch 1,
abuseOh wow...shocking is this fic...Ran killed Shinichi. Why? Nice writing style by the way and even if the plot is like this, I still enjoyed. I certainly hope this will not happen in the real anime.
funvince
2008-03-15
ch 3,
abuseThis was a very interesting premise and it was Shinichi's reaction that made the whole thing so poignant and tragic. And I agree with you that the most interesting question to Heiji was not the who but the why.

Ran's motive makes as much sense as anything else as a reason to kill Shinichi. Much better than mere jealousy or because of blackmail. Miyano's motive for saving her was also quite fascinating.
RiaSternchen
2007-09-02
ch 3,
abuseI´m appalled! Ran would not do something like that Q_Q
Anyways, interesting story idea.^^
anaime7
2007-08-31
ch 3,
abuseit was great how u wrote it, seriously!! even though i noe its really not possible that ran will kill shinchi, if ran was thinking like that, she probaly would have killed herself. and o ya i heard so many ppl talk about shinchi's father as the leader of bo, but for some reason 50% that he probaly is...but i dont think he would killed so many ppl just for the pandora...
anyways great story!!i really like it!!
ldrn
2007-08-26
ch 2,
abuseWow, dark. That's taking the "someone they know is in the Black Org" thing to new levels, isn't it? Poor Shinichi... and poor Heiji, having sworn that then found out.

I really like how the last two sentences of Chapter 2 came together.
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