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Reviews For: A Change of Drawers

abovetherim
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abuseI liked it it was cute and humerous! I even enjoyed when u got off track, it was entertaining!
Verity Kindle
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseheheheheheh This is crazy! I love the third-person omniscient narrator p.o.v though! The attention to detail is also very interesting. Great idea! =)
Jesse Hayes
2007-09-30
ch 1,
abuseSomewhat silly, but utterly amazing. Just as quirky as the characters themselves. I am in love with your writing style.

(Oh, and I totally agree with you there. Henry could be persuaded by Betty in just that way.)
spiceandnice
2007-09-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseRegina,

I thought this was a really cute and funny ficlet. It made me flashback to when I was younger and I saw a music video for the BeeGees and I asked my mother if their tights pants was why they sang so high and she asnwered "No, it's the reason why so the birth rate declined in the 70s".

Anyhow, I also liked how you experimented with taking down the invisible wall between reader and writer. The coversationlist tone really worked with this piece and made it more intimate and charming.

Sorry it took me so long to review! I'm just getting back into the habit of UB!
countryapple
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuseThis is a very cute and funny story.
TracyLynn
2007-08-24
ch 1,
abuseVery cute, loved it. I can totally see Henry making a change for Betty.
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