 Original-Red-And-Pink-4ever 2008-03-03 . chapter 1I loved this! |
 monkeerangerfan 2008-01-19 . chapter 1great story. wish there was more of it. like maybe writing about the ranger reunion. |
 PhinalPhantasy 2007-12-15 . chapter 1Pretty good, though Trini is the last person i expected to chew him out since they really didn't know each other that well, and the way she was going on you'd think she was his girlfriend instead of Tanya, but anways i liked the way it ended. |
 Eddy 2007-09-06 . chapter 1 This made me so incredibly happy I can't even begin to describe it! Thank you for writing about what happened to Alpha in the end.
All of the characterizations were perfect, even the short phone messages sounded like their characters. |
 Destiny45 2007-08-27 . chapter 1Oh, Adam is so cute! You wrote him adorably in this story, and I loved the big Adam/Tanya romantic moment at the end. Thought it was a little odd that Adam had the post-teamup talk with Trini of all people, seeing as she wasn't one of the people he was closest, too. I think that scene would have worked better with Kim or Aisha.
Before reading your story, I had actually started on my own Adam/Tanya oneshot surrounding the OO team-up. I hope you'll check it out. |
 pinkywriter 2007-08-25 . chapter 1*laughs* I loved it. If you progress this into a chaptered story, it would be more awesome, but this'll do. Great job! :) |
 Dannie Tomlinson 2007-08-25 . chapter 1Wicked fic! Loved it! |
 angellwings 2007-08-24 . chapter 1lol @ Alpha, that was too cute! I'd love to read about the reunion! I would enjoy it if you wrote more!!
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angellwings |
 Blackguard 2007-08-24 . chapter 1fun fic here, don't suppose we'll be seeing any more to this story? |
 psav2005 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Great story, hope theres a sequel |
 emergency70 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Can't wait for more! |
 moonlite-n-roses 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Oh this was funny. Alpha watching Sci-Fi, all the rangers calling him, Trini giving him what-for, all of it. Tanya coming to him worried about him, everything was great. It would be really interesting to see this progress into a series of one-shots. :) |
 GinaStar 2007-08-24 . chapter 1lol...I hope this one is going to be a series instead of a oneshot ;) it would be totally hilarious...I can see it now..."Alpha..Put down that blender..." |
 welleg 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Great story. Poor Adam having to deal with Alpha. |
 Manders1953 2007-08-24 . chapter 1*giggle* That was really cute! ^_^ You should make more of these! It was seriously really cute! |