OMG! this can't be true, she can't be dead. please contiue the rest if there is more.

That was the sadest thing I have ever read. VERY WELL written. I love how you had him take her necklace. So sad.. You HAVE GOT to tell us how El deals with this. Maybe do a "Ghost" thing and have Liv come back to help him solve her murder. *wink*

Wait... was it Olivia who died and yet looking at her self? well it was still GREAT! even though i kinda dont under stand but it probably because its late and im tired but it was still VERY GOOD!

Oh my goodness. Kay was right. This piece was simply too amazing for words.

I think.. I cried.

That was amazing. There's times where I wish I could be just like her.. in the stories that I write. I wish that I can have the strength that she has.. but I know that I never really can.

And I wish I can have the strength that she has in your stories as well. But again.. I know better. I'm not nearly strong enough myself.

That's why I think you did such an amazing job. Because it's something I can only dream of being like.

Hopefully.. I can go with fearlessness as well.
-Kay
Much love for you Kate.

Excellent! Although I'd guess that Olivia was looking at herself, you wrote that scene very well. It reminded me of "A Christmas Carol" during the scenes with the Ghost of Christmas Yet To Come. Also, Elliot's reactions were on target. You did that well.

Keep up the good work.

Wow. I think I almost cried. Awesome story!