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Gratifications of a Liar
2009-06-16 . chapter 2
"I had sex with L."

Holy *tot*! Those are the words I never imagined for Matsuda to say! And to think, he said it to Aizawa XD
tuRtl3bOy
2008-05-15 . chapter 2
“Get off. I have a gun. I’ll shoot you in the right eye.”--best line ever. if i ever own a gun, this is what i'll tell everyone that hugs me. XDD

omigawd, update, please. i'm dying here. XD
Rixiroo
2008-02-12 . chapter 2
I LOVE THE STORY!!
Lin West
2008-01-31 . chapter 2
Aw poor Matsuda! Will he ever get more L again? :o And speaking on L, he is so delightfully L-like, you do a very good job with him.

FYI, your fic nearly blew my cover. I had to cover my mouth quite often to prevent stray laughs from being heard outside the computer room.

Thanks for responding not only once, but now twice to my prompt! It makes a girl very happy. ^^


~Lin West (aka artificalapple)
beamingatyou
2008-01-30 . chapter 2
Wow. L was so freaking blunt. I feel bad for Matsuda. D:
Lambchop Millie
2008-01-29 . chapter 2
:) This chapter was enjoyable, poor Matsuda-kun, update as soon as you can.
4ng3legg
2008-01-26 . chapter 2
good to see you back. :) I rather enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.
xoxoxlovestinksxoxox
2008-01-26 . chapter 2
XD I definitely can't wait for the next part! Hm, suddenly makes sense that Aizawa would be a homophobe. Poor Matsuda, being belittled by Light and whatnot. And L knows he wants it to happen again. Oh, yep. Heck, what are the odds he'll slip some more into his coffee himself? Unless MATSUDA does it... Oh, he's that devious alright... XD
xoxoxlovestinksxoxox
2008-01-11 . chapter 1
-giggle- -giggle- Misa was gonna... To Light... And... XD Someone's devious. There really WAS a reason she didn't want anyone to drink it. Although I would think that so much sugar as L puts in that stuff, it would, like, counteract it... ANYWAY, that was hysterical, and I can see Matsuda blurting something out like that late at night when he's tired and L being like, "Do you want ME to solve this problem for you?" and Matsuda being like, "NOT WHAT I MEANT!" and like, yeah. XD I hope you continue it soon!
4ng3legg
2008-01-02 . chapter 1
-squirming-

just a moment... i'm trying to get my brain to function normally... ahem...

You're an excellent writer! I hope to see more from you soon!
moja_g
2007-11-24 . chapter 1
I love the first chapter! Keep it up!
And add more characters.. it would spice Matsuda’s personality and make him popular, not just for being stupid and a follower, but also for seducing the guys!

Hihi.. J
PeanutButterOreoCookieGirl
2007-11-14 . chapter 1
wow..guh...lol...that was wow...lol... loved it to bits
Lambchop Millie
2007-11-01 . chapter 1
Oh, please write more, that was a really good first chapter.
Kitten001
2007-09-02 . chapter 1
wow...ok..so my advice for you is to just keep on writing the rest of this, so far its really good!!
Seriously, you managed to get L in character which is often the most difficult thing that death note writers have and even better, it was freaking hilarious. I could so imagine this happening lol
Other than that, any grammatical or spelling errors that you might have made were all probably covered up by the awesome plot and god...wow, it was just really good. I'm officially addicted. Update soon! ^_^
missick93
2007-08-25 . chapter 1
...have I already read this one? I dunno, it seems very farmilair. But good! So that's good!
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