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z
2009-12-07 . chapter 1
This is just superb. Your writing has such clarity and yet so much personality, and I just feel so fond of the characters! I honestly could not for the life of me figure out the trick until Edgeworth went out and actually SAID it - and then my reactions just came in waves, somewhat like: 1) what? 2) oh 3) OH 4) OH HIS NAME 5) WRIGHT 6) THE CORRECT WAY, NOT THE RIGHT WAY 7) OH

My mind was pretty much blown to kingdom come and left the rest of me shuddering in overwhelming coolness. Simply beautiful characterizations, plot, foreshadowing, humor, everything...! Thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to read this.
Firey-Moonlight
2009-10-04 . chapter 1
"He seriously considered just telling the other man to take his briefcase full of papers detailing a closed case and to return it to him at a later date so that he could sit in this broom closet and brood for the time being. Not that his pride was going to let him do such a thing."

That, among other lines, made me laugh so hard. I've only recently started reading Phoenix Wright, but I seem to only get Phoenix/Miles and not Miles/Phoenix. Your story is made of win! You should write more of them!
ladybugluck
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
heehee, i love it! i got the hint that it's bottom!Phoenix? it's kinda hard to find stories with Phoenix being uke =/

great job!
Insignificance
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
OH. WOW. AHHAHAHA omg how clever. Do you know how LONG it took me to figure this out? And believe it or not, it was a comment (hinting comment, not a super revealing one) in the reviews that finally gave me the "right" clue. Good god, wow, way too clever. ahahhahahah there are so many witty phrases throughout the whole story too. The one that stood out the most was "Objection! Your Honor, the defense is leading me on!" which cracked me up so hard (and I'm at work!)
Storktimus
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
This story is absolutely wonderful, one of my favourite Phoenix/Miles fanfictions. It is very well written and stays true to the characters. Thanks for writing it, and I hope that you will write more stories for this pairing!
MelMiko
2009-04-19 . chapter 1
Excellent. Absolutely brilliant. You write with a notable love of the English language and unmistakable wit, not to mention a very keen knowledge of the characters. It flowed beautifully. I honestly enjoyed every syllable. Thank you for sharing this with us. Your fan fic was a pleasure to read! Keep up the great work!

~MelMiko.
Mytilene
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
You wins the interwebs.

I found this through a fic rec on LiveJournal- in narumitsu, I believe- and I think it's excellent.

My favorite part I think were the puns right at the end. Those made my day. :)
illsprawl
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
Superb. Your characterizations seem spot-on to me and this was a just a fun read. I loved it. :D
Snape Goes Commando
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
-SQUEALS-

This was wonderful and wickedly funny and cute and HOT and OHMYGODTHATLASTLINEKILLEDME.
baby-pnut
2008-10-23 . chapter 1
Hahaha, i knew that was Phoenix's requirement! XD awesomely written story, I love it all!

'She gave him a raised eyebrow. “What, so you can rape and pillage the whole building?”

“Not in a three hundred dollar jacket,” Edgeworth said, his tone quite serious.'

So funny!
A little bit sonic
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Hn...

That was...amazing! It was funny, sweet and very in character! I love!
xo'ladyfaith
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
haha aww poor edgeworth waiting forever xD it was really good (:
Ptoras
2008-07-11 . chapter 1
Holy crap. That was... err... yeah, I can't type it. It begins with an "S", ends with a "Y", and has a "-mex-" in the middle.

I was expecting something cheesier, though... but I'm glad it wasn't. It was a surprisingly quick read, as well. You did a very good job with this story! Hah. The CORRECT Way instead of the RIGHT way... good one.

"She finally nudged the door open and stepped aside, holding it with her foot as she readjusted her groceries. 'Fine, go tell him.'
Miles nearly walked right past her, then did a double-take as he noticed the pronoun. 'What?'
'You’re wearing a three hundred dollar magenta jacket,' the girl replied.
Miles pursed his lips and sighed through his nose. 'Touché.'"

That made me laugh.

Hey, sorry for the lack of constructive criticism. I couldn't think of any.
ChibiChaos Mage of Chaos
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
Every time I read this, I can't help but love it a little bit more, it's just that good :D
SoWrightSoWrong
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
Damn, I love this. Snarky, witty, and brilliant. :D
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