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Preistess Kitty Neko
2008-07-18
ch 11,
abuseHeheheh, I just couldn't stop laughing and kept getting really strange looks from my family. Love it!
Pearl Warrior
2008-02-15
ch 11,
abuseHello. :)
I liked this one. Very well done. I love reading Rikku/Gippal stories, just love the two together.
Anyway, I liked how you put this together. Yay! :P
Catherine Cullen Potter
2007-12-10
ch 4,
abuseSo cool!
It's hilarious...I loved that thing of Gippal waking up Paine...God that guy surely wants to die fast.
And the conversations online? The best really...
I loved it!
RAWR.Im.A.Monster
2007-10-23
ch 11,
abuseHaha! Aww, I loved that story! ^^! It was so awesome and funneh :D I don't likey Lenny, well I know she apologized but still haha I started dyeing in laughter with the:

“What’s up?” she asked as happily as she could. He leaned against the wall after he shifted his backpack.

“Um…” he started. “We have a problem. And it’s not me. It’s you.” He said, looking completely solemn. Rikku just stared at him until he continued. “You see… my teachers don’t believe that it’s my parents signing my tests. We’re gonna have to work on that.” Rikku thought she was hallucinating for a minute. Then it dawned on her on what he said.

“You mean… ARGH! JERK OFF!” she yelled, smacking him nice and ** the arm. He stared at her in astonishment as he rubbed his arm.


Loved that part! HILLARIOUS :D Loved ur story, and keep on writing sista lol ^-^
Sarcastic Strawberry
2007-10-23
ch 11,
abuseaw!

loved this story so fxcking cute!

hope to see more highschool stories from you soon!

~*~Martina~*~
2hot41guy
2007-10-08
ch 10,
abuseAW! CUTE CHAPPIE! I would have killed u if it was dream jk jk ! lol ^0-^ -sniffle- it's almost over! I really luv this too! :D! The ending of the chappie was perfect btw. ^-^ UPDATE! No dont update cause then the story will end soon! Hm... oh what the hell. UPDATE! ^-^
Sarcastic Strawberry
2007-10-08
ch 10,
abuseaw.wait...so was their fight real??


UPDATE SOON!

~*~Martina~*~
Redhead Rikku
2007-10-06
ch 9,
abuseI love it! Keep writing! MORE MORE! :) I am a big Rikku-Gippal fan and Final Fantasy fan so I really appreciate that you are writing this story!

(I like the Japanese, too! I speak *kinda* it too!)
Sarcastic Strawberry
2007-10-05
ch 9,
abuseaw.. its like becoming a romance novel in this chappie!

loved it!

~*~Martina~*~
2hot41guy
2007-10-04
ch 8,
abusehahah I LOVE IT! Rikkus only in 9th eheheh ^-^ I could totally imagine Gippy siging that! haha! YAY!! FRANCE HERE WE COMEY! lol :D! UPDATE!
Epic Popcorn
2007-10-04
ch 8,
abuseim sorry, but that was idiotic. there is no logic in this chapter. did you forget theyre in dsineyland? and that they spent hundreds of dollars to fly there and to not do anything but sleep and then to get back on a plane and end up in paris...okay so that part was funny, but no one would spend hundreds of dollars to fly somewhere special and not do anything. seriously, even if rikku didnt want to go anymore the rest of them wouldve dragged her for making them spend their money
2hot41guy
2007-10-04
ch 7,
abuseHAHA! I WOVED both cahppies! ^-^ :D! CANT WAIT 4 more!! ahahah disney...hehe THE MOST BESTEST PLACE ON EARTH! lmao :D! UPDATE!
Anon.
2007-09-22
ch 5, anon.
abuseNice fic- I like how you portray the characters we know little about by giving them unique personalities. Oh, and I like Daikenkai- even though I'm crap at it. Keep screwing up at the end... best was a B on heavy. Well, good fic, keep at it!
Sarcastic Strawberry
2007-09-19
ch 5,
abusehehe. i like this story. there was too much scowling though. my gosh did u know that some schools r sayin that juking (im pretty sure thats what gippal and lenne were doing) is "sex or the dance floor" and making kids sigh a CONTRACT 2 say that they wont juke! isnt that dumb! sheesh!

but anyways i just thought id share that since u had that line.


~*~Martina~*~
The Human Lancer
2007-09-18
ch 5,
abuse*squee* AHH!
I love Dance Floor Anthem!
:] Nice update!
Update soon!
:D
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