Aw! That was really sweet! :D

I guess in some areas, Brago really doesn't understand very much. He seemed sort of curious, even, which is an interesting angle to portray him from. He's usually like "WHAOMGPOWERHOUSERAWRBATTLE". xD

Very nice use of imagery in your descriptions of everything, too. I liked the parts about the rich people at their parties. The wording was really nice. Well done!

Yes looking in to each others eyes is a way to talk, right Wonrei?

Wonrei: Shut up.

Meanie.

YAY! YOU EXIST! Or rather, exist on FF. Oneshot it may be, but at least it's good.
Oh well.

You will totally kick so much ass in english,creative writing,or whatever your curriculum is this year! Your imagery,flow of words, and all over neatness is remarkable.:D

O!DAY SPEAKIN' WIT BODAH' LANGUAGE!XD

Very very good~!

I wish I could write like you. TT-TT

It's been a while since we've heard anything from you on this site; great to see you again.

Now about this here story: it's deep, that's all I can say. Nice work.

Keep it up.

Very good! "Chatty" XD! I think I finally understand good litiature...but...i still can't spell...(sobs)

Aww, this is cute. I like it. :3