 shinobilegend 2009-11-26 . chapter 1i love it! will you write more? |
 Jingy5 2009-11-25 . chapter 5fantastic story.. was it dropped or put on hiatus? |
 angieqt12005 2009-11-23 . chapter 5I really love this story so far! it's so cute and really great! I hope you update it again soon, and as to your question, I would add some more smut to next chapter! haha! love it! |
 Kuyugen 2009-11-23 . chapter 5Smut. Definitely.
I'd give more opinions, but frankly this fic is perfect (sheepish grin) and there's nothing to say.
Humor's great, too. |
 Yvette D. 2009-11-23 . chapter 5Oh God!! No more? NO! :(
But don't worry, I understand that you have a life beyond fanfic writing :) (but you're so good at fanfic writing...!)
For the rest I will just have to use imagination! This is what I'm going to imagine happens next:
1. The project gets extended for a week or two (ie: more time with Immy!...because I can't stand to see her go!!)
2. Snape & Harry's relationship continues to develop aswell
3. They both continue to develop their bonds with Immy
4. They (or at least Snape) starts noticing more and more of his characteristics in Immy and does some sort of a magical doll DNA test and finds out he truly is the other parent.
5. Turns out that this was cause by Harry's feeling for Snape (or something like that) This provides even more fuel for the relationship & development of the family...
6. More adorable family moments ensue!
7. More hot slashy moments also ensue!!
8. In the end they have really gotten attached to their little family and really don't want to have to give Immy up... so...
9. Magic, being awesome as it is, somehow allows them to turn her into a real baby (cheesy, I know!) or at least allows her to continue "living" out her life... So they can all be one small happy family! :P
That was fun!
You are SUCH a brilliant writer and story teller!! This was such an original, adorable, hilarious and beautiful story. Thanks you so much for sharing you talents with us! Even if it's not quite finished this story has been so enjoyable... you got me thinking & imagining too :)
much love,
Yvette
xoxoxoxoxoxoxox |
 Yvette D. 2009-11-23 . chapter 4There were so many things at the beginning of this chapter that made me laugh out loud!! This was my favourite:
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Severus’ jaw worked reflexively for a moment. “You don't deserve to be here... I'm kidding; it is easy to make such a mistake... Seriously, though, get out.” Severus continued to stare at the girl until she fled the room in a whirlwind of tears and long, brown hair.
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LOLOLOL!!
Oh and then holy hottness!! Nice, can't wait for more!! |
 Yvette D. 2009-11-23 . chapter 3Great story... cute... touching... and funny!!
Love the t-shirts, they're hilarious! (I've actually started reading Ch 4... "You'd Hit This" LMAO!!) |
 Yvette D. 2009-11-22 . chapter 1Adorable & Hilarious!!
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He just was total ** at this. He didn’t like the baby, and Harry was positive the blasted thing knew it. She just keep crying and giving him looks as if to say, ‘You’re ** rubbish, where’s a proper caregiver? I’ll just keep screaming until I get one. See if I don’t!’
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lol!! loving it! |
 aeebonystar 2009-11-22 . chapter 5Umm, sorry to bother you but are you going to finish this one. I really like it and I really want to know what happens. |
 JB5391 2009-11-11 . chapter 5More Immy and Smut would be good in the last chapter. Is this gonna be finished, I've really enjoyed it. :)
x |
 IloveGaara4ever 2009-11-01 . chapter 5This is so cute!! please continue soon with this story :D And no more fighting, the alternative is much better ;) |
 persephone-kore2593 2009-10-28 . chapter 5So good!
LUVED IT!
xx |
 Rice-Ball247 2009-10-27 . chapter 5Ah I really hope you'll update this and complete it! I miss this fic so much! |
 koishii-tenshi 2009-10-23 . chapter 5Aww! We'll miss immy!.love the story! |
 Mixed reactions. 2009-10-18 . chapter 5 This is delightful at 5 chapters. Too bad the last chapter (6) was never written/posted. Everything is here except the climax and denouement. It's been 14 months since the author posted chapter 5, so I'm guessing the story is abandoned. |