I so love this story! Maybe 'Infected' could be the title name?

Hi again! It’s been a long time; I think you were not continuing this fic. I’m glad you are. Now, we go with good old doc Otto.
And… wow, wow, wow. Great as ever. You combine Octavius’s thoughts along with those of the ¿tentacles? ¿actuators? amazingly. Short, direct phrases make a straight, sharp style, according with the narration. Superb.
I’m already looking forward to reading the next one (I hope it won’t take you too long). Who will it be about?

Nice! Glad to have this fic back! :D

Hey, good chapter! don't think it's a spoiler for SM3 though since you see him as the New Goblin in every commercial! I think chapter three is more of a spoiler.

Aww, this is awesome! *Applauds*

Well, I like it. Unlike TwiLyght, I think the briefer (well explained, of course), the better. Sometimes too much description seems forced and makes the text confused. Personally, I think explaining an idea with few words is an art (I can't do it, I need a lot of phrases to describe an idea :( )

Well, maybe it would have been great if you have made Eddie's anger (all his feelings: hurt, hate, confusion...) a bit more intense. And also his terror towards that dark, viscous stuff that is "engulfing" him, possessing him. And how the terror turns into joy and sensation of power. And then hate again. And so.

The point is making Eddie's emotions more intense (with adjetives, selecting other verbs...), not prolonging the text too much. That's what I think, although I dunno if I have explained well (my English is not very good! :) )

Anyway, is a good work. Maybe not as poetic as Sandman's or thrilling as Harry's (that's because I love Harry but I feel more indifferent about Eddie, I don't know if it's because of the movie), but it's very good.

Next... ¿doctor Connors? He's very unknown to us, I hope your chapter about his POV can make him more approachable. Bye!

PD: Have you decided the verb in Harry's chapter yet? I was thinking about strengthened (either physically and mentally), but I still like more transformed.
PD2: Maybe you could have more reviews if you allow anonymous reviewers. You have that option disabled. Bye!

No offense, but I think I agree with your mom. It's still good and still enjoyable to read, but if you made it a little longer, maybe added a few more lines, you'd acheive the effect you wanted. Nothing major, really--just a few lines placed strategically that convey thoughts that make the story more...complete.

I know how hard it is to add more description without making the writing sound clunky; I struggle with that a LOT.

Freakin AWESOME! Harry is my favourite character too and you described his "metamorphosis" into the Goblin greatly. I absolutely LOVE this chapter.

About the suggestion of the verb, I can't think of one new right now, but I really like "transformed"

I can't wait to see what are you doing with the rest of the characters. Eddie, Peter... even J! That would be amusing! And... what about the symbiote itself? (well, I dunno if it can think, but its POV would be quite interesting).
Anyway, keep up your wonderful story, bye!

Great chapter! Without a doubt, Harry is my favorite character. I'd say that a good verb to describe him at this point would be either "empowered." "Avenged" came to mind, but I'm not sure how well it would fit.

Hey there! I'm still very much in love with this beautiful piece. It's a wonderful interpretation of Flint's thoughts that you just can't get from the movie.

I can't wait to re-read the other chapters!

~Angelbaby

Nice look inside Flint's head! He's such an interesting character, and you captured him very well.

Great! A very good Flint Marko's POV. That scene (Sandman's birth) is one of the best scenes of the movie. And I bet Marko was feeling and thinking the way you describe in this chapter.

So, the POV is different in each chapter, isn't it? Well, who's next?
Please continue this fic, it's quite interesting! Bye!