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MoonDust - - x3
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
GASP!

I really do love this piece.
I was left flabbergasted and I couldn't breathe for a second.

Seriously though, you had me going there.
I was like' Yay! This story is just so cute! '

& Then silly old dumb Sora - I LOVE YOU SORA! - wrecked everything!

Great Job!
Born 13th Month, 32nd Day...
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Do I laugh or cry? My head's kinda crammed with Riku's sexgodness so I can't tell.
Endings Matter Most
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
WHAT? Why did that have to end badly for Riku? Seriously... I was pulling for him! But then again... I'm ALWAYS pulling for him... BUT STILL! That was amazing Kaiku and it has to end Sokai... that always happens to me. I get my hopes up then smashed flat. All well. It was beautiful Riku-emoness.
The Fuzy Llama
2008-10-18 . chapter 1
So so cute. ^__^ The ending made me sad; why didn't he fight for her? It seemed like episode after episode suddenly led to an abrupt stop, and at the end I was left feeling like something was missing.

Then again, Riku seems like the sort who wouldn't go after her with that sort of 'oh he deserves her and I don't' type logic. But just because she's chasing Sora doesn't mean that she's choosing Sora over Riku. It just means that she doesn't want to alienate Sora and make their friendship awkward. Riku is too busy beating himself down at the moment to realise that...

Wow... It's really sad, but I want a Chapter 2. *sheepish grin*
Sorasgirl333
2008-07-05 . chapter 1
oh my goodness, i'm glad you did post this! ♥ I loved how simple it was yet told so much ♥ loved it! =D
Manco
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
Is there going to be a sequel that goes full stream with a Riku/Kairi/Sora love triangle?

I don't usually support Riku/Kairi but this was well done.
i AM the Random Idiot
2007-10-01 . chapter 1
Okay, that was MADE OF FREAKING WIN.

Seriously. You rock. Eat some cookies.
Shadowblitz
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
I really like this story! But it's a little sad D: Poor Riku...
Ahem nice work!
Reading Chick
2007-09-04 . chapter 1
*claps enthusiastically* Bravo, bravo!
Tishannia
2007-09-03 . chapter 1
I think it was very good, I liked it! :D Riku/Kairi = love. Although, not for poor Riku in this one.

Great job!
streetglowsix6six
2007-08-27 . chapter 1
I thought it was beautiful, Cindri. It was something different, and you did it well. In its own way it was deep, something inexplicable. I hope you do more like this one day.

~Kya
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