|Reviews for More than a Machine|
| Emerald Gaze 10/16/11 . chapter 1
thats pretty deep and i like how you related everything he experienced with memories of past experiences it really does humanize him a bit more
i also like that diana gets what she wants and she's very good at getting it!_!
| kalfire12 7/27/11 . chapter 1
nice very good
| TyriaT 10/5/09 . chapter 1
Teasing can be just as hot as the actual act, and you did this very well. Having Diana take away one sense to enhance the others was a great idea. You make a very good point in the author notes at the end. I have always said that hugs can heal the world. Wonderful job.
| Miles333 6/13/09 . chapter 1
Very romantic. I thought this was a really great story, and I liked the title. :)
| crazy4fanfic2008 10/4/08 . chapter 1
That's some AMAZING and perfect chemistry right there.
| Ardans 8/24/08 . chapter 1
I love these glimpses into their married lives. All I can say is more, more, more...I'm greedy for every splendid moment, be it a night of passion in the batcave or a day of diaper duty in baby Nicolas's nursery.
| serenity wayne 7/8/08 . chapter 1
i like your philosophies
i like this one shot
| Agashi 9/10/07 . chapter 1
I loved the idea behind this one. You were able to get inside his head without making him come across as too sappy. There was just the right balance of sentimentality, desire, and Bruce being Bruce. _ Well done.
| Julia 9/5/07 . chapter 1
That was...beautiful. Simple, sensual, tender...I could go on, but I think you get the idea. A lovely piece which is both true to the characters, yet also explores them further, allowing the characters to grow, to reveal hidden potential. Too often, I think we forget that however meticulous, or 'robotic' our favorite detective can seem, he is still driven to do what he does by a wealth of emotion. He is not a machine, by any means, but a deep-feeling individual.
Oh, listen to me prattle on...and here I was just going to write a short review!
| gummiworld 8/30/07 . chapter 1
Rock...On...! That is all.
| KittsonFlowers 8/25/07 . chapter 1
GBMWWF- Nice one! You've greatly executed a steamy bmww oneshot! And you have written their chemistry perfectly. Write more!
| Hepburn 8/25/07 . chapter 1
It was lovely and sensual. I don't know why but it made me think of the Kate Bush song "The Sensual World". I don't know if you know that song or not, but if you do then I think you get the gist of what I am trying to impart. Touch,smell,taste,hearing and seeing all have tangible and intangible properties, I agree with what you are saying. As I have said before, and I will say it again, you are an excellent weaver of stories!:)
| Felonaz 8/24/07 . chapter 1
Okay, so first off: loved it! I agree with you that a lot of people think that Bruce is a slave to his mind and his toys, someone who refuses to feel and experience like the rest of us. But I do not think so. Like you, I believe that he's just a man. A very stoic, methodical man, but a man nonetheless.
Second: when I first read it through, I had a hard time believing that cinnamaldehye, zingiberene, and vanillin were real chemicals, but since you're the science major out of the two of us, I will believe you. Also, I googled them, and it appears that they are real. So you win. This time. )
Also, I'm a sucker for some good BMWW action! Yay!
| Kipling Bunny 8/24/07 . chapter 1
You better not send HC... lol
So I really loved this. Yay for steamy BMWW moments.
It's a very well written one shot and you've, yet again, done a fabulous job! :)
This part cracked me up:
“Sir, she wishes to see you upstairs.”
He continued typing, not sparing the old man a glance or responding to his words in the slightest.
The butler raised an eyebrow and remarked more to himself than to anyone else in the room, “I’ll send her down, sir.”