I like the fact they start with the 'what if'.

I'm not really Physco. This was a very good story, but I think that you should have developed most ideas. I got a bit teary in there when Edward was crying. You were wonderful with the way you made Edward and Riza's romance develop. Nice job.

aw, cuteness and sadness!

corny. but good descriptions.. i suck at those

When I read the summary and heard it was an EdxRiza thing, I thought that it might make a difficult story to write, but you made it seem easy. Amazing story, and I agree with Deathlife, I loved the way you put that line too. Keep up the good work!

I love this story its really cute and sad a the same time. I really wasn't expecting much, but you surprised me. I love how you put "head up his ass" for Mustang. Loved it, here *throws cookies* CHOCOLATE!! COOKIES!!